Author: dmagda
Date: Wed Mar 25 18:25:01 2020
New Revision: 1875665

URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc?rev=1875665&view=rev
Log:
merged Prachi's edits for the front and IMC pages

Modified:
    ignite/site/branches/ignite-redisign/in-memory-computing.html
    ignite/site/branches/ignite-redisign/index.html

Modified: ignite/site/branches/ignite-redisign/in-memory-computing.html
URL: 
http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/ignite/site/branches/ignite-redisign/in-memory-computing.html?rev=1875665&r1=1875664&r2=1875665&view=diff
==============================================================================
--- ignite/site/branches/ignite-redisign/in-memory-computing.html (original)
+++ ignite/site/branches/ignite-redisign/in-memory-computing.html Wed Mar 25 
18:25:01 2020
@@ -68,22 +68,17 @@ under the License.
             store with APIs and libraries designed and optimized for 
high-performance data processing. Each cluster node
             (physical or virtual machine) contributes its available memory 
space with CPU cores to the total capacity of
             the cluster. An application interacts with the cluster as a single 
unit letting the latter shield and manage
-            all the internals related to inter-nodes communication, data 
distribution and queries processing. The
+            all the internals related to inter-nodes communication, data 
distribution, and queries processing. The
             cluster
             scales linearly and horizontally to meet the application's data 
volume and throughput goals.
         </p>
         <p>
             Apache Ignite is a horizontally scalable, fault-tolerant 
distributed in-memory computing platform used to
-            build
-            real-time applications processing terabytes of data with in-memory 
speed. Ignite's distributed multi-tier
-            storage
-            scales up and out across available memory and disk resources and 
can be configured to function as an
-            in-memory
-            cache, in-memory data grid, or in-memory databases. It's compute 
and data processing APIs are capable of
-            handling
-            large data sets with minimal or no network utilization by applying 
affinity co-location techniques for data
-            and
-            compute logic.
+            build real-time applications processing terabytes of data with 
in-memory speed. Ignite's distributed multi-tier
+            storage scales up and out across available memory and disk 
resources and can be configured to function as an
+            in-memory cache, in-memory data grid, or in-memory database. Its 
compute and data processing APIs are capable of
+            handling large data sets with minimal or no network utilization by 
applying affinity co-location techniques for data
+            and compute logic.
         </p>
 
         <div class="jumbotron jumbotron-fluid">

Modified: ignite/site/branches/ignite-redisign/index.html
URL: 
http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/ignite/site/branches/ignite-redisign/index.html?rev=1875665&r1=1875664&r2=1875665&view=diff
==============================================================================
--- ignite/site/branches/ignite-redisign/index.html (original)
+++ ignite/site/branches/ignite-redisign/index.html Wed Mar 25 18:25:01 2020
@@ -243,7 +243,7 @@ under the License.
                         </svg>
                         <h3>In-Memory Database</span></h3>
                         <p>
-                            Scale out and up across RAM, NVRAM, Flash and disk 
with Ignite as an
+                            Scale out and up across RAM, NVRAM, Flash, and 
disk with Ignite as an
                             in-memory database with distributed multi-tier 
storage.
                         </p>
                     </a>
@@ -267,8 +267,7 @@ under the License.
                         <h3>Applications Acceleration & Data Caching</h3>
                         <p>
                             Gain up to 100x acceleration for existing 
services, applications, and APIs using Apache
-                            Ignite
-                            as a distributed high-performance in-memory layer. 
Keep underlying databases in sync,
+                            Ignite as a distributed high-performance in-memory 
layer. Keep underlying databases in sync,
                             using Ignite as an in-memory data grid.
                         </p>
 
@@ -297,11 +296,9 @@ under the License.
                         <h3>Digital Integration Hub</h3>
                         <p>
                             Consolidate multiple internal systems and external 
data silos with Apache Ignite as a
-                            low-latency,
-                            high-performance shared data store. Apache Ignite 
is used to cache and persist data sets
-                            dispersed
-                            across many disjointed external databases and 
systems providing developers with functionally
-                            rich, unified and consistent APIs.
+                            low-latency, high-performance shared data store. 
Use Apache Ignite to cache and persist data sets
+                            dispersed across multiple disjointed external 
databases and systems providing developers with
+                            functionally rich, unified and consistent APIs.
                         </p>
 
                         <a href="/use-cases/dih.html" class="btn btn-primary"
@@ -376,7 +373,7 @@ under the License.
                             </svg>
                             <h3>Distributed <span>Key-Value</span></h3>
                             <p>
-                                Read, write, transact with high-performant 
key-value APIs that support JCache
+                                Read, write, and transact with high-performant 
key-value APIs that support JCache
                                 specification.
                             </p>
                         </a>
@@ -391,7 +388,7 @@ under the License.
                             <h3>ACID <span>Transactions</span></h3>
 
                             <p>
-                                Execute distributed ACID transactions across 
memory and disk tiers including relational
+                                Execute distributed ACID transactions across 
memory and disk tiers, including relational
                                 databases.
                             </p>
                         </a>
@@ -406,7 +403,7 @@ under the License.
                             <h3>Co-located <span>Processing</span></h3>
 
                             <p>
-                                Eliminate data shuffling by running data- and 
compute-intensive calculations on
+                                Eliminate data shuffling by running 
data-intensive and compute-intensive calculations on
                                 cluster nodes.
                             </p>
                         </a>


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