Author: jani
Date: Tue May  6 19:47:15 2014
New Revision: 1592853

URL: http://svn.apache.org/r1592853
Log:
textual updates

Modified:
    labs/cms/trunk/content/faq.html

Modified: labs/cms/trunk/content/faq.html
URL: 
http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/labs/cms/trunk/content/faq.html?rev=1592853&r1=1592852&r2=1592853&view=diff
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--- labs/cms/trunk/content/faq.html (original)
+++ labs/cms/trunk/content/faq.html Tue May  6 19:47:15 2014
@@ -65,7 +65,7 @@
             The firsts are efforts that are mostly done by a few individuals, 
with a lot of freedom and 
             peace and it's expected of many of such efforts to fail. The ASF 
grew around established projects
             and focused its entire incubation efforts around the concept of 
nurturing and bootstrapping
-            healthy and diverse open development communities. Unfortunately, 
it has been duly noted that
+            healthy and diverse open development communities. However, it has 
been duly noted that
             incubation and innovation can hardly coexist at the same time and 
that the foundation didn't
             contain a place were its own committers can get together and 
bootstrap new ideas and were
             forced to go to external locations. Apache Labs was established to 
provide a place were trusted
@@ -78,12 +78,12 @@
         <h4>3. Why can only apache committers ask for a lab?</h4>
         <p>
            Apache Labs wants to be a place were it's easy and natural for 
people to work on new things
-           and collaborate, without fearing that somebody is trying to 'abuse' 
the apache brand and
+           and collaborate, without fearing that somebody is trying to 'abuse' 
the Apache brand and
            boost their web visibility by just placing their stuff overhere. 
Since it's really hard to create
            a 'trust' filter, Apache Labs is simply reusing the collective 
social filtering that
            project do in their normal activity by granting commit access. This 
drastically simplifies the 
            labs operations and reduces social friction: you have to earn your 
social respect somewhere
-           else in the foundation before you can ask for a lab. We are aware 
that this might potentially
+           else in the foundation (be a committer in at least one Apache 
project) before you can ask for a lab. We are aware that this might potentially
            reduce our ability to innovate, but we are willing to pay this 
price for a simpler day-to-day
            operation.
         </p>
@@ -105,7 +105,7 @@
            consensus in a 72 hour period of 
            the <a href="team.html">Apache Labs PMC</a> before it can be 
established. This is done
            to avoid that committers use labs as their personal 'dumping' 
grounds and that labs
-           remain topic-specific. Also allows the PMC to force the committers 
to express their intention
+           remain topic-specific. It also allows the PMC to force the 
committers to express their intention
            clearly and in advance, and to make sure that their 
machine-readable descriptors are
            sound.
         </p>
@@ -138,10 +138,10 @@
            Apache Labs expects a lot of labs with a few people per lab and not 
a lot of need for 
            public coordination between them. Asking for lab-specific mail 
lists has several disadvantages:
            <ul>
-             <li>it increases the weight of labs on the apache 
infrastructure</it>
+             <li>it increases the weight of labs on the Apache 
infrastructure</it>
              <li>it reduces the ability for people to 'watch over the 
shoulder' of labs activity and 
              become interested serendipitously</li>
-             <li>it forces a low threshold for activity that might trigger the 
promotion of a lab
+             <li>it encourages a low threshold for activity that might trigger 
the promotion of a lab
              that has a lot of momentum toward the incubation</li>
            </ul>
         </p>



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