bgawrych commented on code in PR #21090:
URL: https://github.com/apache/incubator-mxnet/pull/21090#discussion_r917653470


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docs/python_docs/python/tutorials/getting-started/gluon_migration_guide.md:
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@@ -19,9 +19,9 @@
 # Gluon2.0: Migration Guide
 
 ## Overview
-Since the introduction of the Gluon API in MXNet 1.x, it has superseded 
commonly used symbolic, module and model APIs for model development. In fact, 
Gluon was the first in the deep learning community to unify the flexibility of 
imperative programming with the performance benefits of symbolic programming, 
through just-in-time compilation. 
+Since the introduction of the Gluon API in MXNet 1.x, it has superseded 
commonly used symbolic, module and model APIs for model development. In fact, 
Gluon was the first in the deep learning community to unify the flexibility of 
imperative programming with the performance benefits of symbolic programming, 
through just-in-time compilation.
 
-In Gluon2.0, we extend the support to MXNet numpy and numpy extension with 
simplified interface and new functionalities: 
+In Gluon2.0, we extend the support to MXNet numpy and numpy extension with 
simplified interface and new functionalities:

Review Comment:
   Shouldn't numpy be written as NumPy? Also there is inconsistency in ndarray 
- sometimes it's ndarray and sometimes NDArray



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docs/python_docs/python/tutorials/getting-started/gluon_migration_guide.md:
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@@ -33,41 +33,41 @@ In Gluon2.0, we extend the support to MXNet numpy and numpy 
extension with simpl
 
 - **Gluon Metrics** and **Optimizers**: refactored with MXNet numpy interface 
and addressed legacy issues.
 
-Adopting these new functionalities may or may not require modifications on 
your models. But don't worry, this migration guide will go through a high-level 
mapping from old functionality to new APIs and make Gluon2.0 migration a 
hassle-free experience.  
+Adopting these new functionalities may or may not require modifications on 
your models. But don't worry, this migration guide will go through a high-level 
mapping from old functionality to new APIs and make Gluon2.0 migration a 
hassle-free experience.
 
 ## Data Pipeline
-**What's new**: In Gluon2.0, `MultithreadingDataLoader` is introduced to speed 
up the data loading pipeline. It will use the pure MXNet C++ implementation of 
dataloader, datasets and batchify functions. So, you can use either MXNet 
internal multithreading mode dataloader or python multiprocessing mode 
dataloader in Gluon2.0. 
+**What's new**: In Gluon2.0, `MultithreadingDataLoader` is introduced to speed 
up the data loading pipeline. It will use the pure MXNet C++ implementation of 
dataloader, datasets and batchify functions. So, you can use either MXNet 
internal multithreading mode dataloader or python multiprocessing mode 
dataloader in Gluon2.0.
 
-**Migration Guide**: Users can continue with the traditional 
gluon.data.Dataloader and the C++ backend will be applied automatically. 
+**Migration Guide**: Users can continue with the traditional 
gluon.data.Dataloader and the C++ backend will be applied automatically.
 
-[Gluon2.0 
dataloader](../../api/gluon/data/index.rst#mxnet.gluon.data.DataLoader) will 
provide a new parameter called `try_nopython`. This parameter takes a default 
value of None; when set to `True` the dataloader will compile the python 
dataloading pipeline into pure MXNet c++ implementation. The compilation is not 
guaranteed to support all use cases, but it will fallback to python in case of 
failure: 
+[Gluon2.0 
dataloader](../../api/gluon/data/index.rst#mxnet.gluon.data.DataLoader) will 
provide a new parameter called `try_nopython`. This parameter takes a default 
value of None; when set to `True` the dataloader will compile the python 
dataloading pipeline into pure MXNet C++ implementation. The compilation is not 
guaranteed to support all use cases, but it will fallback to python in case of 
failure:
 
-- The dataset is not fully [supported by the 
backend](../../api/gluon/data/index.rst#mxnet.gluon.data.Dataset)(e.g., there 
are custom python datasets).
+- The dataset is not fully [supported by the 
backend](../../api/gluon/data/index.rst#mxnet.gluon.data.Dataset) (e.g., there 
are custom python datasets).
 
-- Transform is not fully hybridizable. 
+- Transform is not fully hybridizable.
 
-- Bachify is not fully [supported by the 
backend](https://github.com/apache/incubator-mxnet/blob/master/python/mxnet/gluon/data/batchify.py).
 
+- Bachify is not fully [supported by the 
backend](https://github.com/apache/incubator-mxnet/blob/master/python/mxnet/gluon/data/batchify.py).
 
 
-You can refer to [Step5 in Crash 
Course](https://mxnet.apache.org/versions/master/api/python/docs/tutorials/getting-started/crash-course/5-datasets.html#New-in-MXNet-2.0:-faster-C++-backend-dataloaders)
 for a detailed performance increase with C++ backend. 
+You can refer to [Step5 in Crash 
Course](https://mxnet.apache.org/versions/master/api/python/docs/tutorials/getting-started/crash-course/5-datasets.html#New-in-MXNet-2.0:-faster-C++-backend-dataloaders)
 for a detailed performance increase with C++ backend.

Review Comment:
   ```suggestion
   You can refer to [Step 5 in Crash 
Course](https://mxnet.apache.org/versions/master/api/python/docs/tutorials/getting-started/crash-course/5-datasets.html#New-in-MXNet-2.0:-faster-C++-backend-dataloaders)
 for a detailed performance increase with C++ backend.
   ```



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