lupyuen commented on PR #13511:
URL: https://github.com/apache/nuttx/pull/13511#issuecomment-2357577613

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   The provided PR description does not fully meet the NuttX requirements. 
Here's a breakdown and suggestions for improvement:
   
   **Strengths:**
   
   * **Summary:** Briefly explains the change and provides a link to the source 
of the requirement.
   * **Testing:** Includes code examples demonstrating the functionality before 
and after the change.
   
   **Areas for Improvement:**
   
   * **Summary:**
       * **Why is this change necessary?**  Elaborate on the benefits of having 
`msync`. Why is it important to implement it based on the current `mmap` 
implementation? 
       * **What functional part of the code is being changed?** Be specific 
about which files and functions are modified.
       * **How does the change exactly work?** Provide a more technical 
explanation of how `msync` interacts with the existing `mmap` logic.
   
   * **Impact:**  The current response is too brief. Address **all** the points:
       * **Is a new feature added?**  (YES - msync)
       * **Impact on the user:** YES - Users can now utilize `msync`.  Describe 
how they would use it and what benefits it offers.
       * **Impact on build:**  Are any new build options introduced? Any 
dependencies added?
       * **Impact on hardware:** Specify if this change affects any specific 
architectures or boards.
       * **Impact on documentation:** YES -  You need to document the new 
`msync` functionality. State if this documentation is included in the PR.
       * **Impact on security:** Are there any potential security implications 
of adding `msync`? Explain and mitigate if so.
       * **Impact on compatibility:** Does this change affect backward 
compatibility?
   
   * **Testing:**
       * **Build Host(s):** Specify the operating system, CPU architecture, and 
compiler used for testing.
       * **Target(s):** Be specific about the target architecture(s) and board 
configurations used for testing.
       * **Testing logs:** While code examples are good, include actual output 
logs from running the code before and after the change.  
   
   **Revised Impact Section Example:**
   
   ```
   ## Impact
   
   * **Is a new feature added?** YES, the `msync()` system call is now 
supported.
   * **Impact on user:** YES, users can now utilize `msync()` to synchronize 
memory-mapped files with their corresponding files on disk. This is essential 
for applications that require data consistency between memory and storage.
   * **Impact on build:** NO, the build process remains unchanged. No new build 
options or dependencies are introduced.
   * **Impact on hardware:** NO, this change does not specifically target any 
particular hardware architectures or boards. 
   * **Impact on documentation:** YES, documentation updates are required to 
describe the new `msync()` functionality and its usage. These updates are 
included in this PR.
   * **Impact on security:**  The addition of `msync()` itself doesn't 
introduce new security vulnerabilities, however, improper usage of `msync()` by 
application developers could potentially lead to data corruption or 
inconsistencies. 
   * **Impact on compatibility:**  This implementation aims to be backward 
compatible. No existing functionality is expected to be broken.
   ```
   
   **Additional Tips:**
   
   * **Clarity:** Use clear and concise language throughout the description. 
   * **Technical Details:** Don't be afraid to get technical, especially when 
explaining the implementation and potential impact.
   * **Thoroughness:** Address all the required points in the template.
   
   By improving the PR description, you make it easier for reviewers to 
understand your changes and ensure a smoother review process. 
   


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