nuttxpr commented on PR #14214:
URL: https://github.com/apache/nuttx/pull/14214#issuecomment-2409687306

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   Let's break down if this NuttX Pull Request (PR) summary meets the 
requirements:
   
   **Meeting the Requirements?**
   
   * **Partially:** The PR summary provides some information, but it lacks 
crucial details.
   
   **What's Good:**
   
   * **Change Necessity:**  You clearly state the change is specific to 
`esp32s3/partition` and involves inspecting MTD partitions and relocating enums.
   * **Functional Area:**  You specify the exact code sections 
(`esp32s3/partition`, `ota_img_ctrl_e`, `ota_img_bootseq_e`).
   * **Target:**  You mention the PR only impacts `esp32s3`.
   * **Testing:** You indicate testing was done on `esp32s3-devkitc`, but no 
logs are provided.
   
   **What Needs Improvement:**
   
   * **Why is this change necessary?** 
       *  Is there a bug being fixed?
       *  Is this a new feature to support MTD text partitions? 
       *  Why do the enums need relocation (accessibility, code organization)?
   * **How does the change work?**
       * Be more specific about the inspection process. What determines if a 
partition is "mapped as text"?
       * Where are the enums being moved *to*? Just saying "a directory visible 
to the application" is too vague.
   * **Impact Section:**
       * **New Feature/Existing Change:**  Is this a new feature, or does it 
modify an existing one?
       * **User Impact:** Will users need to change their applications or 
configurations due to the relocated enums?
       * **Build Impact:**  Will any build steps, configurations, or 
dependencies change?
       * **Documentation:** Do any code comments, API docs, or user guides need 
updates to reflect these changes?
   * **Testing:**
       * **Build Host Details:** Specify the OS, compiler, and their versions 
used for testing.
       * **Testing Logs:**  Provide the requested "before" and "after" logs to 
demonstrate the change's effect.
   
   **Revised Summary Example:**
   
   ```
   ## Summary
   
   This PR addresses an issue on the `esp32s3` where the current OTA update 
mechanism does not correctly handle MTD partitions formatted as text.  To 
resolve this:
   
   1. **MTD Text Partition Inspection:** The `esp32s3/partition` code is 
modified to inspect the `factory`, `ota_0`, and `ota_1` partitions to determine 
if they are using a text-based file system (e.g., SPIFFS). 
   
   2. **Enum Relocation:** The `ota_img_ctrl_e` and `ota_img_bootseq_e` enums, 
previously in a platform-specific location, are moved to 
`arch/esp32s3/include/esp32s3/ota.h` to provide consistent access for 
applications performing OTA updates.
   
   This change ensures correct handling of text-based MTD partitions during OTA 
updates, improving compatibility with various file system configurations.
   
   ## Impact
   
   * **Existing Feature Change:** Modifies the OTA update process on `esp32s3`.
   * **User Impact:**  YES. Applications using the relocated OTA enums will 
need to update their include paths. 
   * **Build Impact:** NO.
   * **Hardware Impact:** Only impacts `esp32s3` boards. 
   * **Documentation:** YES. The OTA update documentation will be updated to 
describe the MTD partition inspection and the new location of the OTA enums.
   * **Security Impact:** NO.
   * **Compatibility Impact:**  This improves forward compatibility by 
supporting a wider range of MTD configurations.
   
   ## Testing
   
   * **Build Host:** Ubuntu 20.04, GCC 9.4.0
   * **Target:**  `esp32s3-devkitc`
   
   **Testing Logs (Before):**
   [Provide relevant log snippets showing the issue]
   
   **Testing Logs (After):**
   [Provide log snippets demonstrating the fix] 
   ```
   
   By providing this level of detail, you make it much easier for reviewers to 
understand the purpose, implementation, and impact of your changes, leading to 
a smoother and faster review process. 
   


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