nuttxpr commented on PR #2808: URL: https://github.com/apache/nuttx-apps/pull/2808#issuecomment-2451593624
[**\[Experimental Bot, please feedback here\]**](https://github.com/search?q=repo%3Aapache%2Fnuttx+13552&type=issues) __Fill In The Commit Message:__ This PR contains a Commit with an Empty Commit Message. Please fill in the Commit Message with the PR Summary. Yes, this PR appears to meet the NuttX requirements, although some sections could be more explicit. Here's a breakdown and suggestions for improvement: **Strengths:** * **Clear Summary:** The summary clearly states the purpose of the change: improving the `nxdiag` example for Espressif devices. * **Specific Impact:** The impact section identifies the affected devices (all ESP32 devices). * **Detailed Testing:** The testing section provides specific configuration options, expected output, and a log snippet. This demonstrates functionality and allows for easy verification. **Areas for Improvement:** * **Summary (What functional part & How it works):** While stating the *why* (improvement), the summary lacks details on *what* part of `nxdiag` is changed and *how* the improvement is achieved. For example, "The `nxdiag` example is improved by adding the ability to display Espressif-specific information such as bootloader version, toolchain version, flash ID, and security information." * **Impact (More Explicit "NO" answers):** While mentioning "All ESP32 devices" implies some impact, explicitly state "NO" for categories without impact. For example: "Impact on user: NO", "Impact on build: NO (assuming the required Espressif tools are already installed)", "Impact on documentation: YES (the documentation should be updated to reflect the new `nxdiag` capabilities for Espressif devices)". This removes ambiguity. * **Impact (Security and Compatibility):** Even if there's no impact, briefly justify the "NO". For example, "Impact on security: NO (This change only reads existing information and does not introduce new vulnerabilities)." and "Impact on compatibility: NO (This change only adds functionality and does not affect existing `nxdiag` features)." * **Testing (Before Change Logs):** Include logs from *before* the change to demonstrate the improvement. This shows what was missing and how the PR addresses it. * **Testing (Build Host):** Specify the build host details as requested in the template. * **Testing (Multiple Targets):** Ideally, test across multiple ESP32 variants (e.g., ESP32, ESP32-S2, ESP32-C3) to ensure broader compatibility. **Example of an improved Summary and Impact:** ``` ## Summary This change enhances the `nxdiag` example to provide more detailed diagnostic information for Espressif devices. It adds support for displaying Espressif-specific details, including bootloader version, toolchain information, flash and chip IDs, security settings, and MAC address. This is achieved by integrating Espressif's APIs and tools into the `nxdiag` framework. Relates to [NuttX Issue #XXX] (if applicable). ## Impact * Is new feature added? YES * Is existing feature changed? YES (The `nxdiag` command now outputs additional information for Espressif devices) * Impact on user: NO (Users can simply run the `nxdiag` command to access the new information.) * Impact on build: NO (assuming the required Espressif tools are already installed) * Impact on hardware: YES (This change specifically targets Espressif ESP32 devices) * Impact on documentation: YES (The documentation should be updated to describe the new `nxdiag` output for Espressif devices.) * Impact on security: NO (This change only reads existing information and does not introduce new vulnerabilities). * Impact on compatibility: NO (This change only adds functionality and does not affect existing `nxdiag` features). * Anything else to consider: N/A ``` By addressing these points, the PR will be even stronger and easier for reviewers to assess. -- This is an automated message from the Apache Git Service. To respond to the message, please log on to GitHub and use the URL above to go to the specific comment. To unsubscribe, e-mail: [email protected] For queries about this service, please contact Infrastructure at: [email protected]
