nuttxpr commented on PR #2993:
URL: https://github.com/apache/nuttx-apps/pull/2993#issuecomment-2656357465

   [**\[Experimental Bot, please feedback 
here\]**](https://github.com/search?q=repo%3Aapache%2Fnuttx+13552&type=issues)
   
   
   
   Yes, this PR appears to meet the NuttX requirements, although the provided 
information could be more thorough.
   
   Here's a breakdown of why and suggestions for improvement:
   
   **Strengths:**
   
   * **Clear Summary:** The summary concisely explains the problem and solution.
   * **Issue Reference:** Linking the issue is crucial for traceability.
   * **Testing Evidence:** Providing build logs and a screenshot demonstrates 
testing effort.
   * **Impact Description:**  Clearly states the impact is fixing a build issue.
   
   **Weaknesses & Suggestions:**
   
   * **Incomplete Summary:** While the summary addresses *what* changed, it 
lacks detail on *how* the Makefile was updated.  Specify the old and new values 
of `QUICKJS_URL_BASE`.  Mentioning the functional part affected (build system) 
would also be helpful.
   * **Limited Testing Detail:**  While logs are provided, more context is 
needed.
       * **Before Change Logs:**  Show the build failure caused by the 
incorrect URL.
       * **After Change Logs:**  Ideally, show a successful build including the 
download and integration of QuickJS.  The screenshot isn't very informative on 
its own.
       * **Target Details:** Be more specific about the target. "sim:quickjs" 
is good, but adding information about the host OS and compiler used for the 
local build would improve reproducibility. Example: "Alpine Linux, GCC 12.2.1".
   * **Incomplete Impact Assessment:** While the build impact is addressed, 
consider other potential impacts:
       * **Documentation:**  If any documentation refers to the old URL, it 
needs updating.
       * **Compatibility:**  Is this change backward compatible?  If someone 
had manually worked around the issue before, could this change cause problems 
for them?
   * **Missing "Before Change" Logs:**  Showing the build failure *before* the 
change is vital for demonstrating the fix's effectiveness.
   
   **Example of Improved Testing Section:**
   
   ```
   Testing
   
   I confirm that changes are verified on local setup and works as intended:
   
   * Build Host(s): Alpine Linux, GCC 12.2.1
   * Target(s): sim:quickjs
   
   Testing logs before change:
   
   ```
   make -j
   ...
   Downloading from incorrect URL...
   ...
   Error: Download failed / Could not find QUICKJS
   ...
   make: *** [...] Error 1
   ```
   
   Testing logs after change:
   
   ```
   make -j
   ...
   Downloading from https://new.correct.url/quickjs...
   ...
   Successfully downloaded QUICKJS
   ...
   Building QUICKJS...
   ...
   Linking QUICKJS...
   ...
   Build complete.
   ```
   
   Github Actions Build Log: [link to specific section showing successful 
download and build]
   
   
   ```
   
   
   By addressing these points, the PR will be even stronger and easier for 
reviewers to assess.
   


-- 
This is an automated message from the Apache Git Service.
To respond to the message, please log on to GitHub and use the
URL above to go to the specific comment.

To unsubscribe, e-mail: [email protected]

For queries about this service, please contact Infrastructure at:
[email protected]

Reply via email to