Author: robweir
Date: Tue Oct 29 16:15:33 2013
New Revision: 1536788

URL: http://svn.apache.org/r1536788
Log:
more edits

Modified:
    openoffice/ooo-site/trunk/content/development/releases/eol-nl.mdtext

Modified: openoffice/ooo-site/trunk/content/development/releases/eol-nl.mdtext
URL: 
http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/openoffice/ooo-site/trunk/content/development/releases/eol-nl.mdtext?rev=1536788&r1=1536787&r2=1536788&view=diff
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--- openoffice/ooo-site/trunk/content/development/releases/eol-nl.mdtext 
(original)
+++ openoffice/ooo-site/trunk/content/development/releases/eol-nl.mdtext Tue 
Oct 29 16:15:33 2013
@@ -16,7 +16,6 @@ Notice:    Licensed to the Apache Softwa
            specific language governing permissions and limitations
            under the License.
 
-
 With each new release of OpenOffice, users are strongly encouraged to upgrade, 
to benefit from new features, bug fixes and security improvements. After a new 
major release, 
 the Community supports legacy releases for a period of time to allow users to 
upgrade and migrate.  At a later time these legacy releases are declared to be 
 ["End-of-Life"](http://www.openoffice.org/development/releases/eol.html) and 
are no longer suported.
@@ -27,11 +26,11 @@ We have detected that you are running an
 If your preferred language is not yet available, the following options are 
available:
 
   - Download Apache OpenOffice 4.0.1 in another language that you are familiar 
with.
-  - Continue running an unsupported version of OpenOffice.
+  - (Not Recommended) Continue running an unsupported version of OpenOffice
   - Sign up for our [announcements mailing 
list](http://openoffice.apache.org/mailing-lists.html#announce-mailing-list) so 
you will be notified of new languages and 
   releases when they become available.
   - Volunteer to [help translate](http://openoffice.apache.org/translate.html) 
OpenOffice into your native language.   
 
 Apache OpenOffice relies on our community of volunteers to write code, test, 
support and translate OpenOffice.  We have many translations that are 90%+ 
complete and require only
-a few hours of volunteer effort to complete. If you can help, send an email to 
[[email protected]](mailto: [email protected]) and tell us 
what language you can help with.
+a few days of volunteer effort to complete. If you can help, send an email to 
[[email protected]](mailto: [email protected]) and tell us 
what language you can help with.
 


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