Author: robweir
Date: Mon Nov 4 16:17:48 2013
New Revision: 1538664
URL: http://svn.apache.org/r1538664
Log:
Change title, correct mailing list link
Modified:
openoffice/ooo-site/trunk/content/development/releases/eol-nl.mdtext
Modified: openoffice/ooo-site/trunk/content/development/releases/eol-nl.mdtext
URL:
http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/openoffice/ooo-site/trunk/content/development/releases/eol-nl.mdtext?rev=1538664&r1=1538663&r2=1538664&view=diff
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--- openoffice/ooo-site/trunk/content/development/releases/eol-nl.mdtext
(original)
+++ openoffice/ooo-site/trunk/content/development/releases/eol-nl.mdtext Mon
Nov 4 16:17:48 2013
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-Title: End-of-Life for OpenOffice 3.3.0 and earlier
+Title: Please upgrade to OpenOffice 4.0.1 - or help translate it into your
language
Notice: Licensed to the Apache Software Foundation (ASF) under one
or more contributor license agreements. See the NOTICE file
distributed with this work for additional information
@@ -17,10 +17,10 @@ Notice: Licensed to the Apache Softwa
under the License.
With each new release of OpenOffice, users are strongly encouraged to upgrade,
to benefit from new features, bug fixes and security improvements. After a new
major release,
-the Community supports legacy releases for a period of time to allow users to
upgrade and migrate. At a later time these legacy releases are declared to be
-["End-of-Life"](http://www.openoffice.org/development/releases/eol.html) and
are no longer suported.
+the OpenOffice Community supports legacy releases for a period of time to
allow users to upgrade and migrate. At a later time these legacy releases are
declared to be
+["End-of-Life"](http://www.openoffice.org/development/releases/eol.html) and
are no longer supported.
-We have detected that you are running an unsupported version of
OpenOffice.org. We recommend that you upgrade to the current version,
+We have detected that you are running an old, unsupported version of
OpenOffice.org. We recommend that you upgrade to the current version,
[Apache OpenOffice 4.0.1](http://www.openoffice.org/download), which is
available for download in [many
languages](http://www.openoffice.org/download/other.html).
If your preferred language is not yet available, the following options are
available:
@@ -32,5 +32,5 @@ If your preferred language is not yet av
- (Not Recommended) Continue running an unsupported version of OpenOffice
Apache OpenOffice relies on our community of volunteers to write code, test,
support and translate OpenOffice. We have many translations that are 90%+
complete and require only
-a few days of volunteer effort to complete. If you can help, send an email to
[[email protected]](mailto: [email protected]) and tell us
what language you can help with.
+a few days of volunteer effort to complete. If you can help, send an email to
[[email protected]](mailto: [email protected]) and tell us
what language you can help with.
