labuladong commented on code in PR #17499:
URL: https://github.com/apache/pulsar/pull/17499#discussion_r964611349


##########
site2/docs/tiered-storage-aws.md:
##########
@@ -14,50 +14,10 @@ Follow the steps below to install the AWS S3 offloader.
 
 - Pulsar: 2.4.2 or later versions
 
-### Step
-
 This example uses Pulsar 2.5.1.

Review Comment:
   ```suggestion
   
   ```



##########
site2/docs/tiered-storage-azure.md:
##########
@@ -14,50 +14,10 @@ Follow the steps below to install the Azure BlobStore 
offloader.
 
 - Pulsar: 2.6.2 or later versions
 
-### Step
-
 This example uses Pulsar 2.6.2.
 
-1. Download the Pulsar tarball using one of the following ways:
-
-   * Download from the [Apache 
mirror](https://archive.apache.org/dist/pulsar/pulsar-2.6.2/apache-pulsar-2.6.2-bin.tar.gz)
-
-   * Download from the Pulsar [downloads page](/download)
-
-   * Use [wget](https://www.gnu.org/software/wget):
-
-    ```shell
-    wget 
https://archive.apache.org/dist/pulsar/pulsar-2.6.2/apache-pulsar-2.6.2-bin.tar.gz
-    ```
-
-2. Download and untar the Pulsar offloaders package.
-
-   ```bash
-   wget 
https://downloads.apache.org/pulsar/pulsar-2.6.2/apache-pulsar-offloaders-2.6.2-bin.tar.gz
-   tar xvfz apache-pulsar-offloaders-2.6.2-bin.tar.gz
-   ```
-
-3. Copy the Pulsar offloaders as `offloaders` in the Pulsar directory.
-
-   ```
-   mv apache-pulsar-offloaders-2.6.2/offloaders apache-pulsar-2.6.2/offloaders
-
-   ls offloaders
-   ```
-
-   **Output**
-
-   ```
-   tiered-storage-file-system-2.6.2.nar
-   tiered-storage-jcloud-2.6.2.nar
-   ```
-
-   :::note
-
-   * If you are running Pulsar in a bare metal cluster, make sure that 
`offloaders` tarball is unzipped in every broker's Pulsar directory.
-   * If you are running Pulsar in Docker or deploying Pulsar using a Docker 
image (such as K8s and DCOS), you can use the `apachepulsar/pulsar-all` image 
instead of the `apachepulsar/pulsar` image. `apachepulsar/pulsar-all` image has 
already bundled tiered storage offloaders.
-
-   :::
+1. [Download the Pulsar tarball](getting-started-standalone.md).

Review Comment:
   ```suggestion
   1. [Download the Pulsar 
tarball](getting-started-standalone.md#step-1-download-pulsar-distribution).
   ```



##########
site2/docs/tiered-storage-filesystem.md:
##########
@@ -20,58 +20,10 @@ This section describes how to install the filesystem 
offloader.
 
 - Pulsar: 2.4.2 or higher versions
 
-### Step
-
 This example uses Pulsar 2.5.1.
 
-1. Download the Pulsar tarball using one of the following ways:
-
-   * Download the Pulsar tarball from the [Apache 
mirror](https://archive.apache.org/dist/pulsar/pulsar-2.5.1/apache-pulsar-2.5.1-bin.tar.gz)
-
-   * Download the Pulsar tarball from the Pulsar [download page](/download/)
-
-   * Use the [wget](https://www.gnu.org/software/wget) command to download the 
Pulsar tarball.
-
-    ```shell
-    wget 
https://archive.apache.org/dist/pulsar/pulsar-2.5.1/apache-pulsar-2.5.1-bin.tar.gz
-    ```
-
-2. Download and untar the Pulsar offloaders package.
-
-   ```bash
-   wget 
https://downloads.apache.org/pulsar/pulsar-2.5.1/apache-pulsar-offloaders-2.5.1-bin.tar.gz
-
-   tar xvfz apache-pulsar-offloaders-2.5.1-bin.tar.gz
-   ```
-
-   :::note
-
-   * If you run Pulsar in a bare-metal cluster, ensure that the `offloaders` 
tarball is unzipped in every broker's Pulsar directory.
-   * If you run Pulsar in Docker or deploy Pulsar using a Docker image (such 
as K8S and DCOS), you can use the `apachepulsar/pulsar-all` image. The 
`apachepulsar/pulsar-all` image has already bundled tiered storage offloaders.
-
-   :::
-
-3. Copy the Pulsar offloaders as `offloaders` in the Pulsar directory.
-
-   ```
-   mv apache-pulsar-offloaders-2.5.1/offloaders apache-pulsar-2.5.1/offloaders
-
-   ls offloaders
-   ```
-
-   **Output**
-
-   ```
-   tiered-storage-file-system-2.5.1.nar
-   tiered-storage-jcloud-2.5.1.nar
-   ```
-
-   :::note
-
-   * If you run Pulsar in a bare-metal cluster, ensure that `offloaders` 
tarball is unzipped in every broker's Pulsar directory.
-   * If you run Pulsar in Docker or deploy Pulsar using a Docker image (such 
as K8s and DCOS), you can use the `apachepulsar/pulsar-all` image. The 
`apachepulsar/pulsar-all` image has already bundled tiered storage offloaders.
-
-   :::
+1. [Download the Pulsar tarball](getting-started-standalone.md).

Review Comment:
   ```suggestion
   1. [Download the Pulsar 
tarball](getting-started-standalone.md#step-1-download-pulsar-distribution).
   ```



##########
site2/docs/tiered-storage-s3.md:
##########
@@ -20,25 +20,8 @@ Follow the steps below to install the S3 offloader.
 
 This example uses Pulsar 2.9.3.
 
-1. [Download the Pulsar 
tarball](getting-started-standalone.md#install-pulsar-using-binary-release).
-
-2. Download and untar the Pulsar offloaders package, then copy the Pulsar 
offloaders as `offloaders` in the Pulsar directory. See [Install tiered storage 
offloaders](getting-started-standalone.md#install-tiered-storage-offloaders-optional).
-
-   **Output**
-
-   As shown from the output, Pulsar uses [Apache 
jclouds](https://jclouds.apache.org) to support [AWS 
S3](https://aws.amazon.com/s3/), [GCS](https://cloud.google.com/storage/), 
[Azure](https://portal.azure.com/#home), and [Aliyun 
OSS](https://www.aliyun.com/product/oss) for long-term storage.
-
-   ```
-   tiered-storage-file-system-2.9.3.nar
-   tiered-storage-jcloud-2.9.3.nar
-   ```
-
-   :::note
-
-   * If you run Pulsar in a bare-metal cluster, ensure that `offloaders` 
tarball is unzipped in every broker's Pulsar directory.
-   * If you run Pulsar in Docker or deploy Pulsar using a Docker image (such 
as K8s and DCOS), you can use the `apachepulsar/pulsar-all` image. The 
`apachepulsar/pulsar-all` image has already bundled tiered storage offloaders.
-
-   :::
+1. [Download the Pulsar tarball](getting-started-standalone.md).

Review Comment:
   ```suggestion
   1. [Download the Pulsar 
tarball](getting-started-standalone.md#step-1-download-pulsar-distribution).
   ```



##########
site2/docs/tiered-storage-gcs.md:
##########
@@ -14,51 +14,10 @@ Follow the steps below to install the GCS offloader.
 
 - Pulsar: 2.4.2 or later versions
 
-### Step
-
 This example uses Pulsar 2.5.1.

Review Comment:
   ```suggestion
   ### Step
   ```



##########
site2/docs/tiered-storage-aliyun.md:
##########
@@ -14,27 +14,10 @@ Follow the steps below to install the Aliyun OSS offloader.
 
 - Pulsar: 2.8.0 or later versions
 
-### Step
-
 This example uses Pulsar 2.8.0.

Review Comment:
   ```suggestion
   ### Step
   ```



##########
site2/docs/tiered-storage-filesystem.md:
##########
@@ -20,58 +20,10 @@ This section describes how to install the filesystem 
offloader.
 
 - Pulsar: 2.4.2 or higher versions
 
-### Step
-
 This example uses Pulsar 2.5.1.

Review Comment:
   ```suggestion
   ### Step
   ```



##########
site2/docs/tiered-storage-gcs.md:
##########
@@ -14,51 +14,10 @@ Follow the steps below to install the GCS offloader.
 
 - Pulsar: 2.4.2 or later versions
 
-### Step
-
 This example uses Pulsar 2.5.1.
 
-1. Download the Pulsar tarball using one of the following ways:
-
-   * Download from the [Apache 
mirror](https://archive.apache.org/dist/pulsar/pulsar-2.5.1/apache-pulsar-2.5.1-bin.tar.gz)
-
-   * Download from the Pulsar [download page](/download)
-
-   * Use [wget](https://www.gnu.org/software/wget)
-
-    ```shell
-    wget 
https://archive.apache.org/dist/pulsar/pulsar-2.5.1/apache-pulsar-2.5.1-bin.tar.gz
-    ```
-
-2. Download and untar the Pulsar offloaders package.
-
-   ```bash
-   wget 
https://downloads.apache.org/pulsar/pulsar-2.5.1/apache-pulsar-offloaders-2.5.1-bin.tar.gz
-
-   tar xvfz apache-pulsar-offloaders-2.5.1-bin.tar.gz
-   ```
-
-   :::note
-
-   * If you are running Pulsar in a bare metal cluster, make sure that 
`offloaders` tarball is unzipped in every broker's Pulsar directory.
-   * If you are running Pulsar in Docker or deploying Pulsar using a Docker 
image (such as K8S and DCOS), you can use the `apachepulsar/pulsar-all` image 
instead of the `apachepulsar/pulsar` image. `apachepulsar/pulsar-all` image has 
already bundled tiered storage offloaders.
-
-   :::
-
-3. Copy the Pulsar offloaders as `offloaders` in the Pulsar directory.
-
-   ```shell
-   mv apache-pulsar-offloaders-2.5.1/offloaders apache-pulsar-2.5.1/offloaders
-
-   ls offloaders
-   ```
-
-   **Output**
-
-   ```shell
-   tiered-storage-file-system-2.5.1.nar
-   tiered-storage-jcloud-2.5.1.nar
-   ```
+1. [Download the Pulsar tarball](getting-started-standalone.md).

Review Comment:
   ```suggestion
   1. [Download the Pulsar 
tarball](getting-started-standalone.md#step-1-download-pulsar-distribution).
   ```



##########
site2/docs/tiered-storage-s3.md:
##########
@@ -20,25 +20,8 @@ Follow the steps below to install the S3 offloader.
 
 This example uses Pulsar 2.9.3.

Review Comment:
   ```suggestion
   
   ```



##########
site2/docs/tiered-storage-s3.md:
##########
@@ -20,25 +20,8 @@ Follow the steps below to install the S3 offloader.
 
 This example uses Pulsar 2.9.3.

Review Comment:
   I think this sentence can be removed.



##########
site2/docs/tiered-storage-aliyun.md:
##########
@@ -14,27 +14,10 @@ Follow the steps below to install the Aliyun OSS offloader.
 
 - Pulsar: 2.8.0 or later versions
 
-### Step
-
 This example uses Pulsar 2.8.0.
 
-1. [Download the Pulsar 
tarball](getting-started-standalone.md#install-pulsar-using-binary-release).
-
-2. Download and untar the Pulsar offloaders package, then copy the Pulsar 
offloaders as `offloaders` in the Pulsar directory. See [Install tiered storage 
offloaders](getting-started-standalone.md#install-tiered-storage-offloaders-optional).
-
-   **Output**
-
-   ```bash
-   tiered-storage-file-system-2.8.0.nar
-   tiered-storage-jcloud-2.8.0.nar
-   ```
-
-   :::note
-
-   * If you are running Pulsar in a bare-metal cluster, make sure that 
`offloaders` tarball is unzipped in every broker's Pulsar directory.
-   * If you are running Pulsar in Docker or deploying Pulsar using a Docker 
image (such as K8s and DCOS), you can use the `apachepulsar/pulsar-all` image. 
The `apachepulsar/pulsar-all` image has already bundled tiered storage 
offloaders.
-
-   :::
+1. [Download the Pulsar tarball](getting-started-standalone.md).

Review Comment:
   ```suggestion
   1. [Download the Pulsar 
tarball](getting-started-standalone.md#step-1-download-pulsar-distribution).
   ```



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