Anonymitaet commented on code in PR #18379:
URL: https://github.com/apache/pulsar/pull/18379#discussion_r1016196954


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site2/docs/developer-landing.md:
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+Id: developers-landing
+title: Pulsar for Developers
+sidebar_label: “get started”

Review Comment:
   `"` is correct (not `“` or `”`)



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site2/docs/how-to-landing.md:
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+Id: how-to-landing
+title: How-to

Review Comment:
   Do we need more explanations for `title`? Does `How-to` provide too limited 
info?



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site2/docs/developer-landing.md:
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+---
+Id: developers-landing
+title: Pulsar for Developers
+sidebar_label: “get started”
+---
+
+Developing applications for Pulsar can be a fun and rewarding experience. With 
Pulsar, you can quickly create, deploy, and manage your services using a 
powerful CLI tool and a comprehensive set of libraries. The topics below will 
get you started!
+
+[Simulation tools](develop-tools")

Review Comment:
   `develop-tools"` is not a correct path



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site2/docs/how-to-landing.md:
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+Id: how-to-landing
+title: How-to
+sidebar_label: “”

Review Comment:
   ditto



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site2/docs/install-deploy-upgrade-landing.md:
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+Id: install-deploy-upgrade-landing
+title: Install-Deploy-Upgrade

Review Comment:
   ```suggestion
   title: Install, deploy, and upgrade Pulsar
   ```
   1. Do we need to make it more natural?
   2. Do we need to split it into independent chapters? (that is, one chapter 
for `install`, one for `deploy`, and one for `upgrade`?)



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+Id: how-to-landing
+title: How-to
+sidebar_label: “”
+—
+
+Learning new software can be an overwhelming task, but relax – most aspects of 
Pulsar can be easily configured in just a few steps. These tutorials will show 
you how to quickly create topics, tenants, and namespaces, produce and consume 
messages, and more!

Review Comment:
   ```suggestion
   Learning new software can be an overwhelming task, but relax – most aspects 
of Pulsar can be easily configured in just a few steps. These tutorials show 
you how to quickly create topics, tenants, and namespaces, produce and consume 
messages, and more!
   ```
   
   Write in the simple present tense as much as possible if you are covering 
facts that were, are, and forever shall be true. 
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1lc5j4RtuLIzlEYCBo97AC8-U_3Erzs_lxpkDuseU0n4/edit#bookmark=id.e8uqh1awkcnp



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