Anonymitaet commented on code in PR #684:
URL: https://github.com/apache/pulsar-site/pull/684#discussion_r1312470245


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docs/tiered-storage-overview.md:
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@@ -30,13 +31,15 @@ For example, if you have a topic containing user actions 
that you use to train y
 
 ## How to install tiered storage offloaders?
 
-Pulsar releases a separate binary distribution, containing the tiered storage 
offloaders. To enable those offloaders, you need to download the offloaders 
tarball release:
+Pulsar releases a separate binary distribution, containing the tiered storage 
offloaders. To enable those offloaders, you need to complete the following 
steps.
+
+1. download the offloaders tarball release
 
 ```bash
 wget pulsar:offloader_release_url
 ```
 
-After you download the tarball, untar the offloaders package and copy the 
offloaders as `offloaders` in the pulsar directory:
+2. Untar the offloaders package and copy the offloaders as `offloaders` in the 
pulsar directory

Review Comment:
   ```suggestion
   2. Untar the offloaders package and copy the offloaders as `offloaders` in 
the pulsar directory.
   ```



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docs/tiered-storage-overview.md:
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@@ -2,6 +2,7 @@
 id: tiered-storage-overview
 title: Overview of tiered storage
 sidebar_label: "Overview"
+description: Get a comprehensive understanding of concepts and install methods 
of Pulsar tiered storage.

Review Comment:
   ```suggestion
   description: Get a comprehensive understanding of use cases, installation 
methods, and working principles of Pulsar tiered storage.
   ```



##########
docs/tiered-storage-overview.md:
##########
@@ -30,13 +31,15 @@ For example, if you have a topic containing user actions 
that you use to train y
 
 ## How to install tiered storage offloaders?
 
-Pulsar releases a separate binary distribution, containing the tiered storage 
offloaders. To enable those offloaders, you need to download the offloaders 
tarball release:
+Pulsar releases a separate binary distribution, containing the tiered storage 
offloaders. To enable those offloaders, you need to complete the following 
steps.
+
+1. download the offloaders tarball release

Review Comment:
   ```suggestion
   1. Download the offloaders tarball release.
   ```



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