Anonymitaet commented on code in PR #681: URL: https://github.com/apache/pulsar-site/pull/681#discussion_r1312474812
########## docs/deploy-docker.md: ########## @@ -2,14 +2,12 @@ id: deploy-docker title: Deploy a cluster on Docker sidebar_label: "Docker" +description: Learn to deploy a Pulsar cluster on Docker. --- -To deploy a Pulsar cluster on Docker using Docker commands, you need to complete the following steps: -1. Pull a Pulsar Docker image. -2. Create a network. -3. Create and start the ZooKeeper, bookie, and broker containers. +To deploy a Pulsar cluster on Docker using Docker commands, you need to complete the following steps. -## Pull a Pulsar image +## 1. Pull a Pulsar image Review Comment: Why not use "Step 1"? ########## docs/deploy-bare-metal-multi-cluster.md: ########## @@ -12,18 +13,18 @@ sidebar_label: "Bare metal multi-cluster" ::: -A Pulsar instance consists of multiple Pulsar clusters working in unison. You can distribute clusters across data centers or geographical regions and replicate the clusters amongst themselves using [geo-replication](administration-geo.md). Deploying a multi-cluster Pulsar instance consists of the following steps: - -1. Deploying two separate ZooKeeper quorums: a local quorum for each cluster in the instance and a configuration store quorum for instance-wide tasks -2. Initializing cluster metadata for each cluster -3. Deploying a BookKeeper cluster of bookies in each Pulsar cluster -4. Deploying brokers in each Pulsar cluster - +A Pulsar instance consists of multiple Pulsar clusters working in unison. You can distribute clusters across data centers or geographical regions and replicate the clusters amongst themselves using [geo-replication](administration-geo.md). > #### Run Pulsar locally or on Kubernetes? > This guide shows you how to deploy Pulsar in production in a non-Kubernetes > environment. If you want to run a standalone Pulsar cluster on a single > machine for development purposes, see the [Setting up a local > cluster](getting-started-standalone.md) guide. If you want to run Pulsar on > [Kubernetes](https://kubernetes.io), see the [Pulsar on > Kubernetes](deploy-kubernetes.md) guide, which includes sections on running > Pulsar on Kubernetes, on Google Kubernetes Engine and on Amazon Web Services. -## System requirement +## Procedures Review Comment: Suggest not adding this (because it makes headings hide deeper) and keeping the original texts unchanged. ########## docs/deploy-aws.md: ########## @@ -22,7 +25,7 @@ You also need to make sure that you are currently logged into your AWS account v aws configure ``` -## Installation +## 1. Installation Review Comment: Why not use "Step 1"? -- This is an automated message from the Apache Git Service. To respond to the message, please log on to GitHub and use the URL above to go to the specific comment. To unsubscribe, e-mail: [email protected] For queries about this service, please contact Infrastructure at: [email protected]
