Jennifer88huang commented on a change in pull request #5164: [doc] Improve 
Pulsar Deployment monitoring
URL: https://github.com/apache/pulsar/pull/5164#discussion_r322564899
 
 

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 File path: site2/docs/deploy-monitoring.md
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 @@ -4,22 +4,21 @@ title: Monitoring
 sidebar_label: Monitoring
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-There are different ways to monitor a Pulsar cluster, exposing both metrics 
relative to the usage of topics and the overall health of the individual 
components of the cluster.
+You can use different ways to monitor a Pulsar cluster, exposing both metrics 
that relates to the usage of topics and the overall health of the individual 
components of the cluster.
 
-## Collecting metrics
+## Collect metrics
 
 Review comment:
   Add a lead-in sentence between a heading and its sub-heading.

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