Jennifer88huang commented on a change in pull request #5135: [doc] Improve Pulsar deployment bare metal multi cluster URL: https://github.com/apache/pulsar/pull/5135#discussion_r323028731
########## File path: site2/docs/deploy-bare-metal-multi-cluster.md ########## @@ -215,29 +211,29 @@ $ bin/pulsar initialize-cluster-metadata \ --broker-service-url-tls pulsar+ssl://pulsar.us-west.example.com:6651/ ``` -As you can see from the example above, the following needs to be specified: +As you can see from the example above, you need to specify the following: * The name of the cluster * The local ZooKeeper connection string for the cluster * The configuration store connection string for the entire instance * The web service URL for the cluster * A broker service URL enabling interaction with the [brokers](reference-terminology.md#broker) in the cluster -If you're using [TLS](security-tls-transport.md), you'll also need to specify a TLS web service URL for the cluster as well as a TLS broker service URL for the brokers in the cluster. +If you use [TLS](security-tls-transport.md), you also need to specify a TLS web service URL for the cluster as well as a TLS broker service URL for the brokers in the cluster. Make sure to run `initialize-cluster-metadata` for each cluster in your instance. -## Deploying BookKeeper +## Deploy BookKeeper BookKeeper provides [persistent message storage](concepts-architecture-overview.md#persistent-storage) for Pulsar. Each Pulsar broker needs to have its own cluster of bookies. The BookKeeper cluster shares a local ZooKeeper quorum with the Pulsar cluster. -### Configuring bookies +### Configure bookies -BookKeeper bookies can be configured using the [`conf/bookkeeper.conf`](reference-configuration.md#bookkeeper) configuration file. The most important aspect of configuring each bookie is ensuring that the [`zkServers`](reference-configuration.md#bookkeeper-zkServers) parameter is set to the connection string for the Pulsar cluster's local ZooKeeper. +You can configure BookKeeper bookies using the [`conf/bookkeeper.conf`](reference-configuration.md#bookkeeper) configuration file. The most important aspect of configuring each bookie is ensuring that the [`zkServers`](reference-configuration.md#bookkeeper-zkServers) parameter is set to the connection string for the local ZooKeeper of Pulsar cluster. -### Starting up bookies +### Start up bookies Review comment: "start up" or "start"? ---------------------------------------------------------------- This is an automated message from the Apache Git Service. To respond to the message, please log on to GitHub and use the URL above to go to the specific comment. For queries about this service, please contact Infrastructure at: [email protected] With regards, Apache Git Services
