Huanli-Meng commented on a change in pull request #7667:
URL: https://github.com/apache/pulsar/pull/7667#discussion_r461376285



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File path: site2/docs/getting-started-helm.md
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@@ -200,7 +200,7 @@ We use 
[Minikube](https://kubernetes.io/docs/getting-started-guides/minikube/) i
 
 You can use the Pulsar client to create producers and consumers to produce and 
consume messages.
 
-By default, the Pulsar Helm chart exposes the Pulsar cluster through a 
Kubernetes `LoadBalancer`. In Minikube, you can use the following command to 
get the IP address of the proxy service.
+By default, the Pulsar Helm chart exposes the Pulsar cluster through a 
Kubernetes `LoadBalancer`. In Minikube, you can use the following command to 
view the proxy service.

Review comment:
       ```suggestion
   By default, the Pulsar Helm chart exposes the Pulsar cluster through a 
Kubernetes `LoadBalancer`. In Minikube, you can use the following command to 
check the proxy service.
   ```

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File path: site2/docs/getting-started-helm.md
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@@ -212,19 +212,36 @@ You will see a similar output as below.
 pulsar-mini-proxy            LoadBalancer   10.97.240.109    <pending>     
80:32305/TCP,6650:31816/TCP   28m
 ```
 
-This output tells what are the node ports that Pulsar cluster's binary port 
and HTTP port are exposed to. The port after `80:` is the HTTP port while the 
port after `6650:` is the binary port.
+This output tells what are the node ports that Pulsar cluster's binary port 
and HTTP port are mapped to. The port after `80:` is the HTTP port while the 
port after `6650:` is the binary port.
 
-Then you can find the IP address of your Minikube server by running the 
following command.
+Then you can find the IP address and exposed ports of your Minikube server by 
running the following command.
 
 ```bash
-minikube ip
+minikube service pulsar-mini-proxy -n pulsar
 ```
 
-At this point, you can get the service URLs to connect to your Pulsar client.
+Example output which shows the exposed ip and ports in the second table

Review comment:
       ```suggestion
   **Output**
   ```

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File path: site2/docs/getting-started-helm.md
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@@ -212,19 +212,36 @@ You will see a similar output as below.
 pulsar-mini-proxy            LoadBalancer   10.97.240.109    <pending>     
80:32305/TCP,6650:31816/TCP   28m
 ```
 
-This output tells what are the node ports that Pulsar cluster's binary port 
and HTTP port are exposed to. The port after `80:` is the HTTP port while the 
port after `6650:` is the binary port.
+This output tells what are the node ports that Pulsar cluster's binary port 
and HTTP port are mapped to. The port after `80:` is the HTTP port while the 
port after `6650:` is the binary port.
 
-Then you can find the IP address of your Minikube server by running the 
following command.
+Then you can find the IP address and exposed ports of your Minikube server by 
running the following command.
 
 ```bash
-minikube ip
+minikube service pulsar-mini-proxy -n pulsar
 ```
 
-At this point, you can get the service URLs to connect to your Pulsar client.
+Example output which shows the exposed ip and ports in the second table
 
+```bash
+|-----------|-------------------|-------------|-------------------------|
+| NAMESPACE |       NAME        | TARGET PORT |           URL           |
+|-----------|-------------------|-------------|-------------------------|
+| pulsar    | pulsar-mini-proxy | http/80     | http://172.17.0.4:32305 |
+|           |                   | pulsar/6650 | http://172.17.0.4:31816 |
+|-----------|-------------------|-------------|-------------------------|
+🏃  Starting tunnel for service pulsar-mini-proxy.
+|-----------|-------------------|-------------|------------------------|
+| NAMESPACE |       NAME        | TARGET PORT |          URL           |
+|-----------|-------------------|-------------|------------------------|
+| pulsar    | pulsar-mini-proxy |             | http://127.0.0.1:61853 |
+|           |                   |             | http://127.0.0.1:61854 |
+|-----------|-------------------|-------------|------------------------|
+```
+
+At this point, you can get the service URLs to connect to your Pulsar client. 
Urls for this example:

Review comment:
       ```suggestion
   At this point, you can get the service URLs to connect to your Pulsar 
client. Here are URL examples:
   ```




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