Author: gsim
Date: Thu Jul  8 09:29:26 2010
New Revision: 961660

URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc?rev=961660&view=rev
Log:
Corrections for hello world callouts.

Modified:
    qpid/trunk/qpid/doc/book/src/Programming-In-Apache-Qpid.xml

Modified: qpid/trunk/qpid/doc/book/src/Programming-In-Apache-Qpid.xml
URL: 
http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/qpid/trunk/qpid/doc/book/src/Programming-In-Apache-Qpid.xml?rev=961660&r1=961659&r2=961660&view=diff
==============================================================================
--- qpid/trunk/qpid/doc/book/src/Programming-In-Apache-Qpid.xml (original)
+++ qpid/trunk/qpid/doc/book/src/Programming-In-Apache-Qpid.xml Thu Jul  8 
09:29:26 2010
@@ -177,19 +177,21 @@ int main(int argc, char** argv) {
          <para>Establishes the connection with the messaging broker.</para>
        </callout>
        <callout id="callout-cpp-session" arearefs="hello-cpp-session">
-         <para>Creates a session object, which maintains the state of all 
interactions with the messaging broker, and manages senders and 
receivers.</para>
+         <para>Creates a session object on which messages will be sent and 
received.</para>
        </callout>
        <callout id="callout-cpp-receiver" arearefs="hello-cpp-receiver">
-         <para>Creates a receiver that reads from the given address.</para>
+         <para>Creates a receiver to receive messages from the given 
address.</para>
        </callout>
        <callout id="callout-cpp-sender" arearefs="hello-cpp-sender">
          <para>Creates a sender that sends to the given address.</para>
        </callout>
        <callout id="callout-cpp-fetch" arearefs="hello-cpp-fetch">
-         <para>Reads the next message. The duration is optional, if omitted, 
will wait indefinitely for the next message.</para>
+         <para>Receives the next message. The duration is optional, if 
omitted, will wait indefinitely for the next message.</para>
        </callout>
        <callout id="callout-cpp-acknowledge" arearefs="hello-cpp-acknowledge">
-         <para>Acknowledges messages that have been read. To guarantee 
delivery, a message remains on the messaging broker until it is acknowledged by 
a client. session.acknowledge() acknowledges all unacknowledged messages for 
the given session&mdash;this allows acknowledgements to be batched, which is  
more efficient than acknowledging messages individually.</para>
+         <para>Acknowledges receipt of all fetched messages on the
+         session. This informs the broker that the messages were
+         transfered and processed by the client successfully.</para>
        </callout>
        <callout id="callout-cpp-close" arearefs="hello-cpp-close">
          <para>Closes the connection, all sessions managed by the connection, 
and all senders and receivers managed by each session.</para>
@@ -242,10 +244,10 @@ finally:
              <para>Establishes the connection with the messaging broker.</para>
            </callout>
            <callout id="callout-python-session" 
arearefs="hello-python-session">
-             <para>Creates a session object, which maintains the state of all 
interactions with the messaging broker, and manages senders and 
receivers.</para>
+             <para>Creates a session object on which messages will be sent and 
received.</para>
            </callout>
            <callout id="callout-python-receiver" 
arearefs="hello-python-receiver">
-             <para>Creates a receiver that reads from the given address.</para>
+             <para>Creates a receiver with which to receive messages from the 
given address.</para>
            </callout>
            <callout id="callout-python-sender" arearefs="hello-python-sender">
              <para>Creates a sender that sends to the given address.</para>
@@ -254,7 +256,9 @@ finally:
              <para>Reads the next message. The duration is optional, if 
omitted, will wait indefinitely for the next message.</para>
            </callout>
            <callout id="callout-python-acknowledge" 
arearefs="hello-python-acknowledge">
-             <para>Acknowledges messages that have been read. To guarantee 
delivery, a message remains on the messaging broker until it is acknowledged by 
a client. session.acknowledge() acknowledges all unacknowledged messages for 
the given session&mdash;this allows acknowledgements to be batched, which is  
more efficient than acknowledging messages individually.</para>
+             <para>Acknowledges receipt of all fetched messages on
+         the session. This informs the broker that the messages were
+         transfered and processed by the client successfully.</para>
            </callout>
            <callout id="callout-python-close" arearefs="hello-python-close">
              <para>Closes the connection, all sessions managed by the 
connection, and all senders and receivers managed by each session.</para>
@@ -323,10 +327,10 @@ namespace Org.Apache.Qpid.Messaging {
          <para>Establishes the connection with the messaging broker.</para>
        </callout>
        <callout id="callout-csharp-session" arearefs="hello-csharp-session">
-         <para>Creates a session object, which maintains the state of all 
interactions with the messaging broker, and manages senders and 
receivers.</para>
+         <para>Creates a session object on which messages will be sent and 
received.</para>
        </callout>
        <callout id="callout-csharp-receiver" arearefs="hello-csharp-receiver">
-         <para>Creates a receiver that reads from the given address.</para>
+         <para>Creates a receiver with which to receive messages from the 
given address.</para>
        </callout>
        <callout id="callout-csharp-sender" arearefs="hello-csharp-sender">
          <para>Creates a sender that sends to the given address.</para>
@@ -335,7 +339,9 @@ namespace Org.Apache.Qpid.Messaging {
          <para>Reads the next message. The duration is optional, if omitted, 
will wait indefinitely for the next message.</para>
        </callout>
        <callout id="callout-csharp-acknowledge" 
arearefs="hello-csharp-acknowledge">
-         <para>Acknowledges messages that have been read. To guarantee 
delivery, a message remains on the messaging broker until it is acknowledged by 
a client. session.acknowledge() acknowledges all unacknowledged messages for 
the given session&mdash;this allows acknowledgements to be batched, which is  
more efficient than acknowledging messages individually.</para>
+         <para>Acknowledges receipt of all fetched messages on the
+         session. This informs the broker that the messages were
+         transfered and processed by the client successfully.</para>
        </callout>
        <callout id="callout-csharp-close" arearefs="hello-csharp-close">
          <para>Closes the connection, all sessions managed by the connection, 
and all senders and receivers managed by each session.</para>



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