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Martin Kleppmann updated SAMZA-136:
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    Attachment: SAMZA-136-v1.html
                SAMZA-136-v1.patch

Attached a patch with edits to the three introduction documents (background, 
concepts, architecture). Also attached a colorised word-diff, which is a little 
easier to read than a line-by-line diff.

I am tempted to change all occurrences of "member" or "member ID" to "user" and 
"user ID" respectively — since I think "user" is much more standard terminology 
outside of LinkedIn. What do you think?

> Copy-editing documentation
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>
>                 Key: SAMZA-136
>                 URL: https://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/SAMZA-136
>             Project: Samza
>          Issue Type: Improvement
>          Components: docs
>    Affects Versions: 0.7.0
>            Reporter: Martin Kleppmann
>            Priority: Minor
>         Attachments: SAMZA-136-v1.html, SAMZA-136-v1.patch
>
>
> The documentation at 
> http://samza.incubator.apache.org/learn/documentation/0.7.0/ is good in terms 
> of content, but would benefit from a bit of editing to make it smoother to 
> read. I am happy to go through it.



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