Author: rahul
Date: Wed Oct 25 15:33:27 2006
New Revision: 467796

URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc?view=rev&rev=467796
Log:
The minutiae involving the differences between services and service options or 
frameworks and framework components seems unwarranted, and too verbose, for a 
"Shale in 5 seconds" type of read.
SHALE-306

Modified:
    shale/framework/trunk/src/site/xdoc/index.xml

Modified: shale/framework/trunk/src/site/xdoc/index.xml
URL: 
http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/shale/framework/trunk/src/site/xdoc/index.xml?view=diff&rev=467796&r1=467795&r2=467796
==============================================================================
--- shale/framework/trunk/src/site/xdoc/index.xml (original)
+++ shale/framework/trunk/src/site/xdoc/index.xml Wed Oct 25 15:33:27 2006
@@ -27,12 +27,12 @@
 
       <p>Shale is a modern web application framework, fundamentally based on
       JavaServer Faces.  Architecturally, Shale is a set of loosely coupled 
services
-      (and service options) that can be combined as needed to meet particular
+      that can be combined as needed to meet particular
       application requirements.  Shale provides additional functionality such 
as
       application event callbacks, dialogs with conversation-scoped state, a 
view
       technology called Clay, annotation-based functionality to reduce
       configuration requirements and support for remoting.  In addition, Shale
-      provides integration links for other frameworks and framework 
components, to
+      provides integration links for other frameworks, to
       ease development when combinations of technologies are required.</p>
 
     </section>


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