Author: brane
Date: Thu Feb 26 10:57:34 2015
New Revision: 1662419
URL: http://svn.apache.org/r1662419
Log:
* site/publish/docs/release-notes/1.9.html:
Fix typos and grammar in the FSX section.
Modified:
subversion/site/publish/docs/release-notes/1.9.html
Modified: subversion/site/publish/docs/release-notes/1.9.html
URL:
http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/subversion/site/publish/docs/release-notes/1.9.html?rev=1662419&r1=1662418&r2=1662419&view=diff
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--- subversion/site/publish/docs/release-notes/1.9.html (original)
+++ subversion/site/publish/docs/release-notes/1.9.html Thu Feb 26 10:57:34 2015
@@ -33,7 +33,7 @@
<li><a href="#fsfs-improvements"
>FSFS improvements</a></li>
<li><a href="#fsx"
- >FSX - A new experimental repository backend</a></li>
+ >FSX – A new experimental repository backend</a></li>
<li><a href="#enhancements"
>Many enhancements and bug fixes</a></li>
<li><a href="#issues"
@@ -505,7 +505,7 @@ means more net speed, some changes may a
</div> <!-- fsfs-improvements -->
<div class="h3" id="fsx">
-<h3>FSX - A new experimental repository backend
+<h3>FSX – A new experimental repository backend
<a class="sectionlink" href="#fsx"
title="Link to this section">¶</a>
</h3>
@@ -536,17 +536,17 @@ these limitations. Here some of the int
<li>Arbitrary meta data storage and indexing facilities.</li>
</ul>
-<p>Development of FSX has been started as a fork of FSFS to guarantee
+<p>Development of FSX was started as a fork of FSFS to guarantee
functional completeness and testability. The current code still contains
remnants of FSFS legacy code and not all of the above improvements have been
-implemented, yet. Later releases will close the gap and remove transitional
+implemented yet. Later releases will close the gap and remove transitional
code.
</p>
<div class="notice">
- <p><span style="color: red"><b>WARNING:</b></span> FSX in NOT production
- ready. DO NOT USE IT - unless you have read this section carefully and
- agreed to the limitations that come with FSX in Subversion 1.9.</p>
+ <p><span style="color: red"><b>WARNING:</b></span> FSX is <b>NOT</b>
production
+ ready. DO NOT USE IT – unless you have read this section carefully
and
+ understand the limitations of FSX in Subversion 1.9.</p>
</div>
</div> <!-- fsx-overview -->
@@ -575,10 +575,10 @@ where FSX might be a viable option:</p>
<p></p>
<div class="notice">
- <p>If you experiment with FSX, please <a href="/mailing-lists">let us
know</a>
- of your findings. This
- is your chance to get your use-case covered before storage format and
- principles of operation are set in stone.</p>
+ <p>If you experiment with FSX, please <a href="/mailing-lists">let
+ us know</a> your findings. This is your chance to get your
+ use-case covered before storage format and principles of
+ operation are set in stone.</p>
</div>
</div> <!-- fsx-usage-scenarios -->
