Author: dsahlberg
Date: Sat May 28 21:19:44 2022
New Revision: 1901374

URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc?rev=1901374&view=rev
Log:
In site/staging:

* index.html, news.html:
  (#news-220509): Minor grammatical corrections

Suggested by: danielsh


Modified:
    subversion/site/staging/index.html
    subversion/site/staging/news.html

Modified: subversion/site/staging/index.html
URL: 
http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/subversion/site/staging/index.html?rev=1901374&r1=1901373&r2=1901374&view=diff
==============================================================================
--- subversion/site/staging/index.html (original)
+++ subversion/site/staging/index.html Sat May 28 21:19:44 2022
@@ -77,14 +77,14 @@
 </h3>
 
 <p>The Subversion 1.10.x line is end of life (<abbr title="End Of 
Life">EOL</abbr>).
-It was released 2018-04-13 and was supported for the last four years according
-to the LTS release life-cycle (see <a
+It was released on 2018-04-13 and was supported for the last four years
+according to the LTS release life-cycle (see <a
 href="/roadmap.html#release-planning">How we plan
 releases</a>). We recommend everyone to update to the current LTS release <a
 href="/download.cgi#recommended-release">1.14.2</a> as soon as practically
 possible since we've stopped accepting bug reports against 1.10.x and will not
-make any more 1.10.x releases. The last release (1.10.8) was made 2022-04-12
-and is available to anyone who can't update to 1.14.</p>
+make any more 1.10.x releases. The last 1.10.x release (1.10.8) was made
+on 2022-04-12 and is available to anyone who can't update to 1.14.</p>
 
 </div>  <!-- news-20220509 -->
 

Modified: subversion/site/staging/news.html
URL: 
http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/subversion/site/staging/news.html?rev=1901374&r1=1901373&r2=1901374&view=diff
==============================================================================
--- subversion/site/staging/news.html (original)
+++ subversion/site/staging/news.html Sat May 28 21:19:44 2022
@@ -33,14 +33,14 @@
 </h3>
 
 <p>The Subversion 1.10.x line is end of life (<abbr title="End Of 
Life">EOL</abbr>).
-It was released 2018-04-13 and was supported for the last four years according
-to the LTS release life-cycle (see <a
+It was released on 2018-04-13 and was supported for the last four years
+according to the LTS release life-cycle (see <a
 href="/roadmap.html#release-planning">How we plan
 releases</a>). We recommend everyone to update to the current LTS release <a
 href="/download.cgi#recommended-release">1.14.2</a> as soon as practically
 possible since we've stopped accepting bug reports against 1.10.x and will not
-make any more 1.10.x releases. The last release (1.10.8) was made 2022-04-12
-and is available to anyone who can't update to 1.14.</p>
+make any more 1.10.x releases. The last 1.10.x release (1.10.8) was made
+on 2022-04-12 and is available to anyone who can't update to 1.14.</p>
 
 </div>  <!-- news-20220509 -->
 


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