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commit de3a1d87b31c1e4d2b2afa8d59499e0cee3c5be9
Author: Michael Holthausen <[email protected]>
AuthorDate: Wed Jun 5 20:53:08 2024 +0200

    docs: various adjustments across the docs (#29093)
    
    Co-authored-by: Evan Rusackas <[email protected]>
    Co-authored-by: John Bodley <[email protected]>
---
 docs/docs/configuration/alerts-reports.mdx       | 2 +-
 docs/docs/configuration/configuring-superset.mdx | 2 +-
 docs/docs/configuration/databases.mdx            | 4 ++--
 docs/docs/configuration/networking-settings.mdx  | 4 ++--
 docs/docs/installation/docker-compose.mdx        | 4 ++--
 docs/docs/installation/upgrading-superset.mdx    | 4 ++--
 docs/docs/quickstart.mdx                         | 4 ++--
 docs/docs/using-superset/exploring-data.mdx      | 4 ++--
 8 files changed, 14 insertions(+), 14 deletions(-)

diff --git a/docs/docs/configuration/alerts-reports.mdx 
b/docs/docs/configuration/alerts-reports.mdx
index cd4ed965c0..d489b6ebd7 100644
--- a/docs/docs/configuration/alerts-reports.mdx
+++ b/docs/docs/configuration/alerts-reports.mdx
@@ -166,7 +166,7 @@ WEBDRIVER_BASEURL_USER_FRIENDLY = "http://localhost:8088";
 ```
 
 You also need
-to specify on behalf of which username to render the dashboards. In general 
dashboards and charts
+to specify on behalf of which username to render the dashboards. In general, 
dashboards and charts
 are not accessible to unauthorized requests, that is why the worker needs to 
take over credentials
 of an existing user to take a snapshot.
 
diff --git a/docs/docs/configuration/configuring-superset.mdx 
b/docs/docs/configuration/configuring-superset.mdx
index 58f37792c5..e21fe5d6dc 100644
--- a/docs/docs/configuration/configuring-superset.mdx
+++ b/docs/docs/configuration/configuring-superset.mdx
@@ -197,7 +197,7 @@ for production use._
 If you're not using Gunicorn, you may want to disable the use of 
`flask-compress` by setting
 `COMPRESS_REGISTER = False` in your `superset_config.py`.
 
-Currently, Google BigQuery python sdk is not compatible with `gevent`, due to 
some dynamic monkeypatching on python core library by `gevent`.
+Currently, the Google BigQuery Python SDK is not compatible with `gevent`, due 
to some dynamic monkeypatching on python core library by `gevent`.
 So, when you use `BigQuery` datasource on Superset, you have to use `gunicorn` 
worker type except `gevent`.
 
 ## HTTPS Configuration
diff --git a/docs/docs/configuration/databases.mdx 
b/docs/docs/configuration/databases.mdx
index 5c73a44d2d..911cd11da7 100644
--- a/docs/docs/configuration/databases.mdx
+++ b/docs/docs/configuration/databases.mdx
@@ -176,7 +176,7 @@ start Python in the Superset application container or host 
environment and try t
 directly to the desired database and fetch data. This eliminates Superset for 
the
 purposes of isolating the problem.
 
-Repeat this process for each different type of database you want Superset to 
be able to connect to.
+Repeat this process for each type of database you want Superset to connect to.
 
 
 ### Database-specific Instructions
@@ -830,7 +830,7 @@ You should then be able to connect to your BigQuery 
datasets.
 To be able to upload CSV or Excel files to BigQuery in Superset, you'll need 
to also add the
 [pandas_gbq](https://github.com/pydata/pandas-gbq) library.
 
-Currently, Google BigQuery python sdk is not compatible with `gevent`, due to 
some dynamic monkeypatching on python core library by `gevent`.
+Currently, the Google BigQuery Python SDK is not compatible with `gevent`, due 
to some dynamic monkeypatching on python core library by `gevent`.
 So, when you deploy Superset with `gunicorn` server, you have to use worker 
type except `gevent`.
 
 
diff --git a/docs/docs/configuration/networking-settings.mdx 
b/docs/docs/configuration/networking-settings.mdx
index 44610c513d..3993c8bfc4 100644
--- a/docs/docs/configuration/networking-settings.mdx
+++ b/docs/docs/configuration/networking-settings.mdx
@@ -43,8 +43,8 @@ running a custom auth postback endpoint), you can add the 
endpoints to `WTF_CSRF
 
 2. Create database w/ ssh tunnel enabled
     - With the feature flag enabled you should now see ssh tunnel toggle.
-    - Click the toggle to enables ssh tunneling and add your credentials 
accordingly.
-        - Superset allows for 2 different type authentication (Basic + Private 
Key). These credentials should come from your service provider.
+    - Click the toggle to enable SSH tunneling and add your credentials 
accordingly.
+        - Superset allows for two different types of authentication (Basic + 
Private Key). These credentials should come from your service provider.
 
 3. Verify data is flowing
     - Once SSH tunneling has been enabled, go to SQL Lab and write a query to 
verify data is properly flowing.
diff --git a/docs/docs/installation/docker-compose.mdx 
b/docs/docs/installation/docker-compose.mdx
index 85e87c7651..82c492de86 100644
--- a/docs/docs/installation/docker-compose.mdx
+++ b/docs/docs/installation/docker-compose.mdx
@@ -117,11 +117,11 @@ its metadata database. In production, this database 
should be backed up.  The de
 with docker compose will store that data in a PostgreSQL database contained in 
a Docker
 [volume](https://docs.docker.com/storage/volumes/), which is not backed up.
 
-Again **DO NOT USE THIS FOR PRODUCTION**
+Again, **DO NOT USE THIS FOR PRODUCTION**
 
 :::
 
-You should see a wall of logging output from the containers being launched on 
your machine. Once
+You should see a stream of logging output from the containers being launched 
on your machine. Once
 this output slows, you should have a running instance of Superset on your 
local machine!  To avoid
 the wall of text on future runs, add the `-d` option to the end of the `docker 
compose up` command.
 
diff --git a/docs/docs/installation/upgrading-superset.mdx 
b/docs/docs/installation/upgrading-superset.mdx
index 55268fb09e..68734aa7ac 100644
--- a/docs/docs/installation/upgrading-superset.mdx
+++ b/docs/docs/installation/upgrading-superset.mdx
@@ -9,13 +9,13 @@ version: 1
 
 ## Docker Compose
 
-First make sure to wind down the running containers in Docker Compose:
+First, make sure to shut down the running containers in Docker Compose:
 
 ```bash
 docker compose down
 ```
 
-Then, update the folder that mirrors the `superset` repo through git:
+Next, update the folder that mirrors the `superset` repo through git:
 
 ```bash
 git pull origin master
diff --git a/docs/docs/quickstart.mdx b/docs/docs/quickstart.mdx
index e1e621a85a..3d3ca11857 100644
--- a/docs/docs/quickstart.mdx
+++ b/docs/docs/quickstart.mdx
@@ -4,14 +4,14 @@ hide_title: false
 sidebar_position: 2
 ---
 
-**Ready to give Apache Superset a try?** This quickstart guide will help you
+**Ready to try Apache Superset?** This quickstart guide will help you
 get up and running on your local machine in **3 simple steps**. Note that
 it assumes that you have [Docker](https://www.docker.com),
 [Docker Compose](https://docs.docker.com/compose/), and
 [Git](https://git-scm.com/) installed.
 
 :::caution
-While we recommend using `Docker Compose` for a quick start in a sandbox-type
+Although we recommend using `Docker Compose` for a quick start in a 
sandbox-type
 environment and for other development-type use cases, **we
 do not recommend this setup for production**. For this purpose please
 refer to our
diff --git a/docs/docs/using-superset/exploring-data.mdx 
b/docs/docs/using-superset/exploring-data.mdx
index f41b0d7cee..90bbf0727a 100644
--- a/docs/docs/using-superset/exploring-data.mdx
+++ b/docs/docs/using-superset/exploring-data.mdx
@@ -137,10 +137,10 @@ Next, within the **Query** section, remove the default 
COUNT(\*) and add Cost, k
 SUM aggregate. Note that Apache Superset will indicate the type of the metric 
by the symbol on the
 left hand column of the list (ABC for string, # for number, a clock face for 
time, etc.).
 
-In **Group by** select **Time**: this will automatically use the Time Column 
and Time Grain
+In **Group by**, select **Time**: this will automatically use the Time Column 
and Time Grain
 selections we defined in the Time section.
 
-Within **Columns**, select first Department and then Travel Class. All set – 
let’s **Run Query** to
+Within **Columns**, first select Department and then Travel Class. All set – 
let’s **Run Query** to
 see some data!
 
 <img src={useBaseUrl("/img/tutorial/tutorial_pivot_table.png" )} />

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