Author: ilgrosso
Date: Fri Oct 16 07:23:12 2015
New Revision: 1708911
URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc?rev=1708911&view=rev
Log:
[SYNCOPE-700] Publish updates after completing grammar fixes by Colm in
http://git-wip-us.apache.org/repos/asf/syncope/commit/405f2123
Modified:
syncope/site/2.0.0-SNAPSHOT/docs/getting-started.html
syncope/site/2.0.0-SNAPSHOT/docs/getting-started.pdf
syncope/site/2.0.0-SNAPSHOT/docs/reference-guide.pdf
Modified: syncope/site/2.0.0-SNAPSHOT/docs/getting-started.html
URL:
http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/syncope/site/2.0.0-SNAPSHOT/docs/getting-started.html?rev=1708911&r1=1708910&r2=1708911&view=diff
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--- syncope/site/2.0.0-SNAPSHOT/docs/getting-started.html (original)
+++ syncope/site/2.0.0-SNAPSHOT/docs/getting-started.html Fri Oct 16 07:23:12
2015
@@ -661,7 +661,7 @@ such as for SOAP, CSV, PowerShell and Ac
<div class="sect2">
<h3 id="hardware"><a class="anchor" href="#hardware"></a>2.1. Hardware</h3>
<div class="paragraph">
-<p>The numbers below are greatly affected by several requirements of given
deployment, in particular the total number of
+<p>The hardware requirements depend greatly on the given deployment, in
particular the total number of
managed entities (users, groups and any objects), their attributes and
resources.</p>
</div>
<div class="ulist">
@@ -681,7 +681,7 @@ managed entities (users, groups and any
<div class="sect2">
<h3 id="java"><a class="anchor" href="#java"></a>2.2. Java</h3>
<div class="paragraph">
-<p>Apache Syncope 2.0.0-SNAPSHOT requires the latest JDK 7 or JDK 8
available.</p>
+<p>Apache Syncope 2.0.0-SNAPSHOT requires the latest JDK 7 or JDK 8 that is
available.</p>
</div>
</div>
<div class="sect2">
@@ -734,12 +734,12 @@ managed entities (users, groups and any
<h2 id="obtain-apache-syncope"><a class="anchor"
href="#obtain-apache-syncope"></a>3. Obtain Apache Syncope</h2>
<div class="sectionbody">
<div class="paragraph">
-<p>There are several ways to obtain Apache Syncope: each method shows
advantages or caveats for different types of users.</p>
+<p>There are several ways to obtain Apache Syncope: each of which has
advantages or caveats for different types of users.</p>
</div>
<div class="sect2">
<h3 id="standalone"><a class="anchor" href="#standalone"></a>3.1.
Standalone</h3>
<div class="paragraph">
-<p>The standalone distribution is the simpler way to start exploring Apache
Syncope: it contains a full working, in-memory
+<p>The standalone distribution is the simplest way to start exploring Apache
Syncope: it contains a fully working, in-memory
Tomcat-based environment that can be easily grabbed and put at work on any
modern laptop, workstation or server.</p>
</div>
<div class="admonitionblock caution">
@@ -757,7 +757,7 @@ First approach, especially with administ
</table>
</div>
<div class="paragraph">
-<p>Getting ready in few easy steps:</p>
+<p>Getting ready in a few easy steps:</p>
</div>
<div class="olist arabic">
<ol class="arabic">
@@ -803,7 +803,7 @@ $ ./bin/startup.sh</code></pre>
<i class="fa icon-tip" title="Tip"></i>
</td>
<td class="content">
-Please refer to <a href="http://tomcat.apache.org/tomcat-8.0-doc/";
target="_blank">Apache Tomcat documentation</a> for more advanced setup and
+Please refer to the <a href="http://tomcat.apache.org/tomcat-8.0-doc/";
target="_blank">Apache Tomcat documentation</a> for more advanced setup and
instructions.
</td>
</tr>
@@ -813,7 +813,7 @@ instructions.
<h4 id="components"><a class="anchor" href="#components"></a>3.1.1.
Components</h4>
<div class="paragraph">
<p>The set of available components, including access URLs and credentials, is
the same as reported for
-<a href="#paths-and-components">embedded mode</a>, with exception of log
files, here available under <code>$CATALINA_HOME/logs</code>.</p>
+<a href="#paths-and-components">embedded mode</a>, with the exception of log
files, available here under <code>$CATALINA_HOME/logs</code>.</p>
</div>
<div class="admonitionblock tip">
<table>
@@ -824,8 +824,8 @@ instructions.
<td class="content">
<div class="title">Internal Storage</div>
<div class="paragraph">
-<p>By default, the standalone distribution is configured for using an
in-memory database instance.
-This means that every time Tomcat is shut down all changes made are lost.</p>
+<p>By default, the standalone distribution is configured to use an in-memory
database instance.
+This means that every time Tomcat is shut down all changes that have been made
are lost.</p>
</div>
<div class="paragraph">
<p>If you want instead to make your changes persistent, replace</p>
@@ -848,7 +848,7 @@ This means that every time Tomcat is shu
This will create H2 database files in the home directory of the user running
Apache Syncope.</p>
</div>
<div class="paragraph">
-<p>Please refer to <a href="http://www.h2database.com/"; target="_blank">H2
documentation</a> for more options.</p>
+<p>Please refer to the <a href="http://www.h2database.com/"; target="_blank">H2
documentation</a> for more options.</p>
</div>
</td>
</tr>
@@ -859,7 +859,7 @@ This will create H2 database files in th
<div class="sect2">
<h3 id="debian-packages"><a class="anchor" href="#debian-packages"></a>3.2.
Debian packages</h3>
<div class="paragraph">
-<p>Debian packages are available for usage with latest <a
href="http://www.debian.org/"; target="_blank">Debian GNU / Linux</a>,
+<p>Debian packages are available for use with <a href="http://www.debian.org/";
target="_blank">Debian GNU / Linux</a>,
<a href="http://www.ubuntu.com/"; target="_blank">Ubuntu</a> and their
derivatives.</p>
</div>
<div class="admonitionblock caution">
@@ -936,7 +936,7 @@ Getting up and running quickly on Debian
</div>
</li>
<li>
-<p>Create a database for usage with Apache Syncope</p>
+<p>Create a database for use with Apache Syncope</p>
<div class="listingblock">
<div class="content">
<pre class="highlightjs highlight"><code class="language-bash"
data-lang="bash">sudo SYNCOPE_USER="syncope" SYNCOPE_PASS="syncope" sh
/usr/share/apache-syncope/dbinit-postgresql.sh</code></pre>
@@ -1007,7 +1007,7 @@ Credentials: <code>admin</code> / <code>
</td>
<td class="content">
<div class="title">Target Audience</div>
-Getting up and running quickly on any supported DBMS and Java EE container,
independently from underlying
+Getting up and running quickly on any supported DBMS and Java EE container,
independently from the underlying
operating system.<br>
<strong>Difficult to extend beyond pre-sets.</strong>
</td>
@@ -1022,13 +1022,13 @@ operating system.<br>
<p><a href="http://maven.apache.org/"; target="_blank">Apache Maven</a>
(version 3.0.3 or higher) installed</p>
</li>
<li>
-<p>one of supported <a href="#internal-storage">DBMSes</a> up and running</p>
+<p>one of the supported <a href="#internal-storage">DBMSes</a> up and
running</p>
</li>
<li>
-<p>one of supported <a href="#java-ee-container">Java EE containers</a> up and
running</p>
+<p>one of the supported <a href="#java-ee-container">Java EE containers</a> up
and running</p>
</li>
<li>
-<p>datasource with name <code>syncopeDataSource</code> configured in the
selected Java EE container, for a database instance in the
+<p>A datasource with the name <code>syncopeDataSource</code> configured in the
selected Java EE container, for a database instance in the
DBMS of choice</p>
</li>
</ol>
@@ -1064,7 +1064,7 @@ of <code>$CATALINA_HOME/conf/tomcat-user
<div class="sect3">
<h4 id="usage"><a class="anchor" href="#usage"></a>3.3.2. Usage</h4>
<div class="paragraph">
-<p>Once <a href="http://syncope.apache.org/downloads.html";
target="_blank">downloaded</a>, double-click the JAR file or execute via
command-line:</p>
+<p>Once <a href="http://syncope.apache.org/downloads.html";
target="_blank">downloaded</a>, double-click the JAR file or execute via the
command-line:</p>
</div>
<div class="listingblock">
<div class="content">
@@ -1114,7 +1114,7 @@ of <code>$CATALINA_HOME/conf/tomcat-user
</dd>
<dt class="hdlist1">Anonymous Key</dt>
<dd>
-<p>provide any pseudo-random string here that will be used an authentication
key for anonymous requests</p>
+<p>provide any pseudo-random string here that will be used as an
authentication key for anonymous requests</p>
</dd>
<dt class="hdlist1">Configuration directory</dt>
<dd>
@@ -1201,7 +1201,7 @@ and extension capabilities.</p>
</td>
<td class="content">
<div class="title">Target Audience</div>
-Provides access to full capabilities of Apache Syncope, and nearly any
possible extension.<br>
+Provides access to the full capabilities of Apache Syncope, and almost all
extensions that are possible.<br>
<strong>Requires Apache Maven (and potentially <a
href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/DevOps"; target="_blank">DevOps</a>)
skills.</strong>
</td>
</tr>
@@ -1268,7 +1268,7 @@ generated project:</p>
</table>
</div>
<div class="paragraph">
-<p>The archetype is configured with default values for all properties
required; if you want to customize any of these
+<p>The archetype is configured with default values for all required
properties; if you want to customize any of these
property values, type 'n' when prompted for confirmation.</p>
</div>
<div class="paragraph">
@@ -1300,7 +1300,7 @@ to the groupId.</p>
</dd>
<dt class="hdlist1">anonymousKey</dt>
<dd>
-<p>Provide any pseudo-random string here that will be used an authentication
key for anonymous requests.</p>
+<p>Provide any pseudo-random string here that will be used as an
authentication key for anonymous requests.</p>
</dd>
</dl>
</div>
@@ -1317,7 +1317,7 @@ specified above) containing three module
</div>
</div>
<div class="paragraph">
-<p>After downloading all the needed dependencies, this will produce two WAR
files:</p>
+<p>After downloading all of the needed dependencies, two WAR files will be
produced:</p>
</div>
<div class="olist arabic">
<ol class="arabic">
@@ -1330,7 +1330,7 @@ specified above) containing three module
</ol>
</div>
<div class="paragraph">
-<p>If no failures are encountered, your basic Apache Syncope project is now
set.</p>
+<p>If no failures are encountered, your basic Apache Syncope project is now
ready to go.</p>
</div>
<div class="admonitionblock note">
<table>
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