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new 9d9d5d8c Update index.html (#187)
9d9d5d8c is described below
commit 9d9d5d8c445e267fe05a5cd778ad2b822ac4300c
Author: Andrew Wetmore <[email protected]>
AuthorDate: Thu Feb 16 11:51:11 2023 -0400
Update index.html (#187)
line 89: change the verb to 'helping' to match 'providing' on line 88
lines 103-107 and 119-123: list is a mix of title case and sentence case.
Made everything sentence case (in general, the more capital letters, the harder
it is to read the thing quickly)
line 123: infra.a.o is rather more than a reference library
line 133: To ==> to
lines 142-150: capitalize first letter in each item
line 152: add missing word "to"
line 154: simplify the text of the option
line 162: Lower-case minor words
line 168: Member's ==> Members'
lines 170-171: simplify the text of the options
line 205: lower-case minor word
line 214: the ==> The, as it is part of the Foundation's name
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www/index.html | 44 ++++++++++++++++++++++----------------------
1 file changed, 22 insertions(+), 22 deletions(-)
diff --git a/www/index.html b/www/index.html
index 16f5e87a..43902d9c 100644
--- a/www/index.html
+++ b/www/index.html
@@ -86,7 +86,7 @@
</header>
<p>The <a href="https://whimsical.apache.org/">Apache Whimsy PMC</a>
manages this server, and maintains the tools here.
Our focus is on providing organizational information about the
ASF and our projects
- in easy to consume ways, and to help automate corporate processes
at the ASF to
+ in easy to consume ways, and helping to automate corporate
processes at the ASF to
make the paperwork behind the scenes easier for our many
volunteers.
Please see the Code, Questions, or Issues links above to learn
more about the project.
</p>
@@ -100,11 +100,11 @@
</div>
<div class="panel-body">
<ul>
- <li><a href="board/minutes/">Board Minutes Collated by
PMC/officer/topic</a></li>
+ <li><a href="board/minutes/">Board minutes collated by
PMC/officer/topic</a></li>
<li><a href="incubator/podlings/by-age">Incubator podlings by
age</a></li>
<li><a href="public/">Generated JSON data files</a></li>
- <li><a href="site/">TLP Website Checks</a></li>
- <li><a href="pods/">Podling Website Checks</a></li>
+ <li><a href="site/">TLP website checks</a></li>
+ <li><a href="pods/">Podling website checks</a></li>
</ul>
</div>
</div>
@@ -117,10 +117,10 @@
<div class="panel-body">
<ul>
<li><a href="https://selfserve.apache.org/">ASF Self-Service
Platform</a></li>
- <li><a href="https://projects.apache.org/">Apache Project
Listing</a></li>
- <li><a href="https://www.apache.org/dev">Apache Developer
How-Tos</a></li>
- <li><a href="https://community.apache.org/">Apache Community
How-Tos</a></li>
- <li><a href="https://infra.apache.org/">Apache Infra Reference
Library</a></li>
+ <li><a href="https://projects.apache.org/">Apache Project
listing</a></li>
+ <li><a href="https://www.apache.org/dev">Apache Developer
how-tos</a></li>
+ <li><a href="https://community.apache.org/">Apache Community
how-tos</a></li>
+ <li><a href="https://infra.apache.org/">Apache Infrastructure
information</a></li>
</ul>
</div>
</div>
@@ -130,7 +130,7 @@
<div class="col-md-6">
<div class="panel panel-info">
<div class="panel-heading">
- <h3 class="panel-title">Available To Committers</h3>
+ <h3 class="panel-title">Available to Committers</h3>
</div>
<div class="panel-body">
<ul>
@@ -139,19 +139,19 @@
including:
<a href="roster/committee/">PMCs</a>
|
- <a href="roster/nonpmc/">other committees</a>
+ <a href="roster/nonpmc/">Other committees</a>
|
- <a href="roster/ppmc/">podlings</a>
+ <a href="roster/ppmc/">Podlings</a>
|
- <a href="roster/group/">groups</a>
+ <a href="roster/group/">Groups</a>
|
- <a href="roster/members">members</a>
+ <a href="roster/members">Members</a>
|
- <a href="roster/committer/">committers</a>
+ <a href="roster/committer/">Committers</a>
</li>
- <li><a href="committers/subscribe">Subscribe and unsubscribe
from mailing lists</a></li>
+ <li><a href="committers/subscribe">Subscribe to and
unsubscribe from mailing lists</a></li>
<li><a href="committers/moderationhelper">Helper for mailing
list moderators (Beta)</a></li>
- <li><a href="committers/tools">Listing of more Whimsy
Tools</a></li>
+ <li><a href="committers/tools">More Whimsy Tools</a></li>
</ul>
</div>
</div>
@@ -159,16 +159,16 @@
<div class="col-md-6">
<div class="panel panel-info">
<div class="panel-heading">
- <h3 class="panel-title">Tools Restricted To Officers Or
Members</h3>
+ <h3 class="panel-title">Tools Restricted to Officers or
Members</h3>
</div>
<div class="panel-body">
<ul>
<li><a href="board/agenda/">Board Agenda</a></li>
<li><a
href="https://svn.apache.org/repos/private/committers/board/calendar.txt">Board
Meeting Calendar</a></li>
- <li><a href="members/meeting.cgi">Member's Meeting
Information</a></li>
+ <li><a href="members/meeting.cgi">Members' Meeting
Information</a></li>
<li><a href="/officers/unlistedclas.cgi">Persons with signed
CLAs but who are not (yet) committers.</a></li>
- <li><a href="officers">Overview Of Useful Officer
Tools</a></li>
- <li><a href="members">Overview Of Useful Member Tools</a></li>
+ <li><a href="officers">Useful Officer Tools</a></li>
+ <li><a href="members">Useful Member Tools</a></li>
</ul>
</div>
</div>
@@ -202,7 +202,7 @@
<div class="footer container-fluid">
<div class="panel panel-default">
<div class="panel-heading">
- <h3 class="panel-title">License And Credits</h3>
+ <h3 class="panel-title">License and Credits</h3>
</div>
<div class="panel-body">
<p>
@@ -211,7 +211,7 @@
|
<a
href="https://www.apache.org/foundation/policies/privacy">Privacy Policy</a>
<br />
- Apache®, the names of Apache projects, and the feather logo are
either <a href="http://www.apache.org/foundation/marks/list/">registered
trademarks or trademarks</a> of the Apache Software Foundation in the United
States and/or other countries.
+ Apache®, the names of Apache projects, and the feather logo are
either <a href="http://www.apache.org/foundation/marks/list/">registered
trademarks or trademarks</a> of The Apache Software Foundation in the United
States and/or other countries.
</p>
</div>
</div>