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     new 9d9d5d8c Update index.html (#187)
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commit 9d9d5d8c445e267fe05a5cd778ad2b822ac4300c
Author: Andrew Wetmore <[email protected]>
AuthorDate: Thu Feb 16 11:51:11 2023 -0400

    Update index.html (#187)
    
    line 89: change the verb to 'helping' to match 'providing' on line 88
    lines 103-107 and 119-123: list is a mix of title case and sentence case. 
Made everything sentence case (in general, the more capital letters, the harder 
it is to read the thing quickly)
    line 123: infra.a.o is rather more than a reference library
    line 133: To ==> to
    lines 142-150: capitalize first letter in each item
    line 152: add missing word "to"
    line 154: simplify the text of the option
    line 162: Lower-case minor words
    line 168: Member's ==> Members'
    lines 170-171: simplify the text of the options
    line 205: lower-case minor word
    line 214: the ==> The, as it is part of the Foundation's name
---
 www/index.html | 44 ++++++++++++++++++++++----------------------
 1 file changed, 22 insertions(+), 22 deletions(-)

diff --git a/www/index.html b/www/index.html
index 16f5e87a..43902d9c 100644
--- a/www/index.html
+++ b/www/index.html
@@ -86,7 +86,7 @@
         </header>
           <p>The <a href="https://whimsical.apache.org/";>Apache Whimsy PMC</a> 
manages this server, and maintains the tools here.
              Our focus is on providing organizational information about the 
ASF and our projects
-             in easy to consume ways, and to help automate corporate processes 
at the ASF to
+             in easy to consume ways, and helping to automate corporate 
processes at the ASF to
              make the paperwork behind the scenes easier for our many 
volunteers.
              Please see the Code, Questions, or Issues links above to learn 
more about the project.
           </p>
@@ -100,11 +100,11 @@
             </div>
             <div class="panel-body">
               <ul>
-                <li><a href="board/minutes/">Board Minutes Collated by 
PMC/officer/topic</a></li>
+                <li><a href="board/minutes/">Board minutes collated by 
PMC/officer/topic</a></li>
                 <li><a href="incubator/podlings/by-age">Incubator podlings by 
age</a></li>
                 <li><a href="public/">Generated JSON data files</a></li>
-                <li><a href="site/">TLP Website Checks</a></li>
-                <li><a href="pods/">Podling Website Checks</a></li>
+                <li><a href="site/">TLP website checks</a></li>
+                <li><a href="pods/">Podling website checks</a></li>
               </ul>
             </div>
           </div>
@@ -117,10 +117,10 @@
             <div class="panel-body">
               <ul>
                 <li><a href="https://selfserve.apache.org/";>ASF Self-Service 
Platform</a></li>
-                <li><a href="https://projects.apache.org/";>Apache Project 
Listing</a></li>
-                <li><a href="https://www.apache.org/dev";>Apache Developer 
How-Tos</a></li>
-                <li><a href="https://community.apache.org/";>Apache Community 
How-Tos</a></li>
-                <li><a href="https://infra.apache.org/";>Apache Infra Reference 
Library</a></li>
+                <li><a href="https://projects.apache.org/";>Apache Project 
listing</a></li>
+                <li><a href="https://www.apache.org/dev";>Apache Developer 
how-tos</a></li>
+                <li><a href="https://community.apache.org/";>Apache Community 
how-tos</a></li>
+                <li><a href="https://infra.apache.org/";>Apache Infrastructure 
information</a></li>
               </ul>
             </div>
           </div>
@@ -130,7 +130,7 @@
         <div class="col-md-6">
           <div class="panel panel-info">
             <div class="panel-heading">
-              <h3 class="panel-title">Available To Committers</h3>
+              <h3 class="panel-title">Available to Committers</h3>
             </div>
             <div class="panel-body">
               <ul>
@@ -139,19 +139,19 @@
                   including:
                   <a href="roster/committee/">PMCs</a>
                   |
-                  <a href="roster/nonpmc/">other committees</a>
+                  <a href="roster/nonpmc/">Other committees</a>
                   |
-                  <a href="roster/ppmc/">podlings</a>
+                  <a href="roster/ppmc/">Podlings</a>
                   |
-                  <a href="roster/group/">groups</a>
+                  <a href="roster/group/">Groups</a>
                   |
-                  <a href="roster/members">members</a>
+                  <a href="roster/members">Members</a>
                   |
-                  <a href="roster/committer/">committers</a>
+                  <a href="roster/committer/">Committers</a>
                 </li>
-                <li><a href="committers/subscribe">Subscribe and unsubscribe 
from mailing lists</a></li>
+                <li><a href="committers/subscribe">Subscribe to and 
unsubscribe from mailing lists</a></li>
                 <li><a href="committers/moderationhelper">Helper for mailing 
list moderators (Beta)</a></li>
-                <li><a href="committers/tools">Listing of more Whimsy 
Tools</a></li>
+                <li><a href="committers/tools">More Whimsy Tools</a></li>
               </ul>
             </div>
           </div>
@@ -159,16 +159,16 @@
         <div class="col-md-6">
           <div class="panel panel-info">
             <div class="panel-heading">
-              <h3 class="panel-title">Tools Restricted To Officers Or 
Members</h3>
+              <h3 class="panel-title">Tools Restricted to Officers or 
Members</h3>
             </div>
             <div class="panel-body">
               <ul>
                 <li><a href="board/agenda/">Board Agenda</a></li>
                 <li><a 
href="https://svn.apache.org/repos/private/committers/board/calendar.txt";>Board 
Meeting Calendar</a></li>
-                <li><a href="members/meeting.cgi">Member's Meeting 
Information</a></li>
+                <li><a href="members/meeting.cgi">Members' Meeting 
Information</a></li>
                 <li><a href="/officers/unlistedclas.cgi">Persons with signed 
CLAs but who are not (yet) committers.</a></li>
-                <li><a href="officers">Overview Of Useful Officer 
Tools</a></li>
-                <li><a href="members">Overview Of Useful Member Tools</a></li>
+                <li><a href="officers">Useful Officer Tools</a></li>
+                <li><a href="members">Useful Member Tools</a></li>
               </ul>
             </div>
           </div>
@@ -202,7 +202,7 @@
     <div class="footer container-fluid">
       <div class="panel panel-default">
         <div class="panel-heading">
-          <h3 class="panel-title">License And Credits</h3>
+          <h3 class="panel-title">License and Credits</h3>
         </div>
         <div class="panel-body">
           <p>
@@ -211,7 +211,7 @@
             |
             <a 
href="https://www.apache.org/foundation/policies/privacy";>Privacy Policy</a>
             <br />
-          Apache&reg;, the names of Apache projects, and the feather logo are 
either <a href="http://www.apache.org/foundation/marks/list/";>registered 
trademarks or trademarks</a> of the Apache Software Foundation in the United 
States and/or other countries.
+          Apache&reg;, the names of Apache projects, and the feather logo are 
either <a href="http://www.apache.org/foundation/marks/list/";>registered 
trademarks or trademarks</a> of The Apache Software Foundation in the United 
States and/or other countries.
           </p>
         </div>
       </div>

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