doc: howto-create-concern minor rewording, fixing an inconsistency

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Branch: refs/heads/master
Commit: 42778a22036213c3360fee04c6573c38ece151c4
Parents: 3ed4896
Author: Paul Merlin <[email protected]>
Authored: Sat Jan 24 13:41:10 2015 +0100
Committer: Paul Merlin <[email protected]>
Committed: Sat Jan 24 13:41:10 2015 +0100

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 manual/src/docs/tutorials/howto-create-concern.txt | 4 ++--
 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)
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http://git-wip-us.apache.org/repos/asf/zest-qi4j/blob/42778a22/manual/src/docs/tutorials/howto-create-concern.txt
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diff --git a/manual/src/docs/tutorials/howto-create-concern.txt 
b/manual/src/docs/tutorials/howto-create-concern.txt
index a22aa07..9b319f5 100644
--- a/manual/src/docs/tutorials/howto-create-concern.txt
+++ b/manual/src/docs/tutorials/howto-create-concern.txt
@@ -19,8 +19,8 @@ 
source=tutorials/introduction/tenminutes/src/main/java/org/qi4j/demo/tenminute/I
 tag=allClass
 -----------
 
-The InventoryConcern is implemented as an abstract class, since we are not 
interested in the many other methods in the
-Order interface. Extending the ConcernOf is a convenience mechanism, instead 
of an explicit @ConcernFor annotation on
+Note that we could have implemented the InventoryConcern as an abstract class 
if we were not interested in __all__ the methods in the Order interface.
+Extending the ConcernOf is a convenience mechanism, instead of an explicit 
@ConcernFor annotation on
 a private field, which can be used in rare occasions when you are not able to 
extend. This base class defines the next
 field, which is set up by the Qi4j runtime and points to the next fragment in 
the call stack. We can also see that the
 InventoryService is provided to the concern, which is done with dependency 
injection. Qi4j also supports dependency

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