Hi Hellekin, I think you raise valid points. I would welcome your edits on the document itself (attached, a new version).
I also versionned the doc with git and posted it at https://github.com/hugoroy/user-data-manifesto Best, Hugo -- Hugo Roy, Free Software Foundation Europe FSFE Legal Team + Deputy Coordinator, www.fsfe.org/legal FSFE French Team + Coordinator, www.fsfe.org/fr Support Free Software, sign up! https://fsfe.org/support