[...]
>
> Looks good, but would be improved by having some links within the document
> (e.g. a table of contents like the old one has).
>

The original is a StarOffice document, and it's export to html leaves a lot 
to be desired.  However, I am planning on switching to a more appropriate 
form to resolve this, but it will be a bit.

> Also, here are a couple of contributions which may be of interest:
>
> I always change the first line of auto-install scripts to
> #!/usr/bin/perl -cw
>

This would make a nice touch to the generated file.

> and make the scripts executable.  After editing you can then simply
> execute the script to do a syntax check.  It only saves three seconds, but
> it's three seconds that can occur hundreds of times.
>

This might be better left to the discretion of the user, but perhaps adding a 
comment to go along with the above #!...  would let the user know he has the 
option...

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>
> You therefore don't need to do anything once you've started off the
> auto-install : just have a cup of coffee and come back ten minutes later
> to find a system that's fully installed and also up and running.

Neat approach.  I gather that you left the orginal section declarations in 
syslinux.cfg and just added a new one?  So then you would boot up with the 
floppy, and select 'linux' on the command line to allow the initial install 
to proceed?

Would it not be easier to just wait a few seconds more till the 2nd stage 
install started, then pop the floppy out to acheive the same result?  This 
would ensure that the computer really does boot correctly from disk.

Dave


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