Fyi. Please note the deadline for comments on the proposed Review Committee charter for the IANA numbering services, tonight UTC 23:59.
Nurani Begin forwarded message: > From: Izumi Okutani <[email protected]> > Date: 6 juli 2015 17:12:35 CEST > To: [email protected] > Subject: Re: [NRO-IANAXFER] Call for Comments for a Draft Internet Number > Community Review Committee Charter > > Dear Colleagues, > > > This is to share the draft comment to be submitted from the CRISP Team on > Review Committee Charter. > We may still have minor changes, but basically, we don't observe any > inconsistencies with the number community proposal. > > I'd also like to once again remind everyone that the comment period set by > NRO is closing soon at UTC23:59 6th July. We encourage you to submit comments > on the draft Review Committee Charter, with more details found at: > https://www.nro.net/news/call-for-comments-for-a-draft-internet-number-community-review-committee-charter > > ---- > The CRISP Team would like thank the NRO for this opportunity to comment on > the draft Internet Number Community Review Committee Charter, Public Draft > v1.0. > > The comment from the CRISP Team focuses on whether there are any > inconsistencies with the number community proposal. In this light, we observe > no inconsistencies with the numbers community proposal Section "III.A.4. > Establishment of a Review Committee" with details described below. > > [Section III.A.4. Establishment of a Review Committee (Description about the > Role)] > > The RIRs shall establish a Review Committee that will advise and assist the > NRO EC in its periodic review. The Review Committee will, as needed, > undertake a review of the level of service received from the IANA Numbering > Services Operator and report to the NRO EC any concerns regarding the > performance of the IANA Numbering Services Operator, including especially any > observed failure or near-failure by the IANA Numbering Services Operator to > meet its obligations under the proposed agreement. Any such Review Committee > will advise the NRO EC in its capacity solely to oversee the performance of > the IANA Numbering Services, and the Review Committee's advice and comment > will be limited to the processes followed in the IANA Numbering Services > Operator's performance under the proposed agreement. > > --> Reflected in "Functions/Objectives" Clauses 1-3 of Internet Number > Community Review Committee Charter Public Draft v1.0. > > As an additional observation, the number community proposal limits the scope > of the Review Committee's advice related to the IANA Numbering Services. > Clause 1 of the charter describes "The Review Committee's main function" > which may give room for additional functions as needed. > We do not observe inconsistencies if additional functions will be related to > advice around the performance of the IANA functions but it may be worth > giving more clarity in the language. > > [Section III.A.4. Establishment of a Review Committee: (Description about > Transparency)] > Activities of the Review Committee shall be conducted in an open and > transparent manner. Reports from the Review Committee shall be published. > --> Reflected in "Proceedings" Clauses 8 and 10, "Transparency" Clauses 11-13 > of Internet Number Community Review Committee Charter Public Draft v1.0. > > [Section III.A.4. Establishment of a Review Committee :( Description about > Composition)] > The Review Committee should be a team composed of suitably qualified Internet > Number Community representatives from each RIR region. The selection of the > Review Committee members should be conducted in an open, transparent, and > bottom-up manner appropriate for each RIR region. There should be equal > representation from each RIR region within the Review Committee. > > --> Reflected in "Composition" Clauses 4 and 5 of Internet Number Community > Review Committee Charter Public Draft v1.0. > > We believe this process of publishing the draft for community feedback > ensures that the implementation of the proposal is consistent with the > consensus of the number community, and appreciate that RIRs, jointly as the > NRO, have published the draft to be open for comments. > > With this draft charter of the Review Committee published, as well as the > first draft of the SLA text which has closed its public comments on 14th > June, the CRISP Team has confidence on the smooth preparation of > implementation of the Number Community proposal in timely manner. > > ---- > > Izumi Okutani > CRISP Team > > > >> On 2015/06/23 13:17, German Valdez wrote: >> Dear Colleagues >> >> Please refer to the below call for comments published today in the NRO >> website >> >> https://www.nro.net/news/call-for-comments-for-a-draft-internet-number-community-review-committee-charter >> >> Regards >> >> German Valdez >> NRO >> >> >> ==== >> >> NRO ��� PUBLIC CONSULTATION >> >> CALL FOR COMMENTS FOR A DRAFT INTERNET COMMUNITY REVIEW COMMITTEE CHARTER >> >> Open until: 6 July 2015, 23:59 UTC >> >> On 15 January, 2015, the Consolidated RIR IANA Stewardship Proposal (CRISP) >> Team submitted the Internet Number Community Proposal to the request for >> proposals issued by the IANA Stewardship Coordination Group (ICG). >> >> One of the key elements of the Internet Number Community Proposal, described >> in section III.A.4, is the establishment of a Review Committee to ensure >> that the service level defined in the proposed SLA for the IANA Numbering >> Services is maintained by the IANA Numbering Services Operator. Further >> description of the Review of IANA Numbering services is described in Article >> 8 of the draft SLA. >> >> All interested parties are now encouraged to review and comment on the draft >> Internet Number Community Review Committee Charter. The document is >> available at >> >> https://www.nro.net/review-committee-charter >> >> This call for public comments will remain open until 6 July, 2015 at 23:59 >> UTC. Comments can be submitted by any interested party to the >> [email protected] mailing list. Subscription to this list is open and >> available at: >> >> https://www.nro.net/mailman/listinfo/ianaxfer >> _______________________________________________ >> ianaxfer mailing list >> [email protected] >> https://www.nro.net/mailman/listinfo/ianaxfer > > > _______________________________________________ > ianaxfer mailing list > [email protected] > https://www.nro.net/mailman/listinfo/ianaxfer
