Hi Roger,
        The sentence has been changed and here is the updated one 
http://cr.openjdk.java.net/~rraghavan/8164781/webrev.04/ . The line length has 
also been fixed as suggested by Paul to adhere to ~80 chars. I have finalized 
the csr too.

Regards
Vivek
-----Original Message-----
From: Roger Riggs 
Sent: Thursday, April 05, 2018 6:35 PM
To: core-libs-dev@openjdk.java.net
Subject: Re: RFR: 8164781: Pattern.asPredicate specification is incomplete

Hi Vivek,

Can we do something to make the first sentence less confusing?
How about:

* Creates a predicate that tests a given input string for a subsequence that 
matches this pattern.

-or-

* Creates a predicate that tests if this pattern is found in a given input 
string. Thanks, Roger

On 4/5/18 6:34 AM, Vivek Theeyarath wrote:
>>> Hi,
>>>     I have incorporated the changes as per the feedback and here is the 
>>> updated webrev .
>>> http://cr.openjdk.java.net/~rraghavan/8164781/webrev.02/ .
>>> Bug: https://bugs.openjdk.java.net/browse/JDK-8164781
>>>
>> +1
> Thanks Paul
>
>> I know it’s picky, but would you mind sticking closer to the existing 
>> line length in the source file (no need for another review)
> Here is my attempt. Hope it is better now. 
> http://cr.openjdk.java.net/~rraghavan/8164781/webrev.03
>
>> Did you run the jtreg test to verify it passes? I missed the problem 
>> initially, glad Stuart caught it, but i presume the test would of reported a 
>> failure? if not there is something wrong with the test itself that should be 
>> investigated.
>
> I missed it earlier. As you rightly pointed out, without Stuart's inputs the 
> test fails and it passes with it as expected.
>
>>> Here is the related csr 
>>> https://bugs.openjdk.java.net/browse/JDK-8200603
>>>
>> Ok, i tweaked some of the information (after creating a CSR one often needs 
>> to edit it to fill in the gaps).
>> Can you blockquote the markdown for the embedded patch since the formatting 
>> is all messed up?
> I have restored the formatting. Hope it would suffice.
> https://bugs.openjdk.java.net/browse/JDK-8200603
>
> Regards
> Vivek

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