On Wed, 4 Jan 2023 20:14:14 GMT, Alan Bateman <[email protected]> wrote:
>> Jaikiran Pai has updated the pull request incrementally with one additional
>> commit since the last revision:
>>
>> Review suggestion
>
> src/java.base/share/classes/java/lang/ThreadLocal.java line 128:
>
>> 126: * value other than {@code null}, then either {@code ThreadLocal}
>> can be
>> 127: * subclassed and this method overridden or {@link
>> ThreadLocal#withInitial(Supplier)} method
>> 128: * can be used to construct a {@code ThreadLocal}.
>
> This looks okay but maybe slightly better to say "or the method
> withInitial(Supplier) can be used ...".
>
> I think you can probably reflow this paragraph to avoid having a mix of short
> and long lines.
Hello Alan, I've updated this PR with this suggested change and also formatted
this new text to avoid having a mix of long and short lines.
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PR: https://git.openjdk.org/jdk/pull/11846
