On Wed, 11 Jan 2012, Denis 'GNUtoo' Carikli wrote:

Denis could
then already correct some errors, if he finds them.
I've found an error:
Page 4 there is:
The standard [insert 'which' here] does not just cover a communications
protocol, is a widely used untire I/O signaling bus and describes the various
physical and electrical characteristics of the PCI hardware.


Sounds awkward. try:

The standard does not just cover a communications protocol, it is a widely
used entire ...
     ^                                                      ^^

  Russ

Denis.

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