Your essay is much better than mine.I'm sorry I can't give you and advice.
On 4月13日, 下午6时52分, "shoog" <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote: > hiii , > i am In troubled and I want a help , I want to correct my essay soon > as you can , my first language is Arabic and I want help please help > me. > this my essay and thanks alot .... > > School Of Life > > Life is a unique experience for every single person , in our life we > learn and experience the most difficult and easiest tests ,and we face > our reality. Life's experiences are important which helps us to learn > something new every day, and every moment. > We should avoid our mistakes that we did and over come our failed > experience to stand up again on our own two feet, and try to succeed. > Every lesson we learn through our experience that affects us to be > stronger. We should accept every experience to become better, even it > is good or bad. In this essay I want to tell you about some lessons > that I have learned from life and the experiences that I have had . > > The first lesson that I have learned is that you should never miss a > chance to tell people that you love them, and if there is any problem, > solve it immediately . Life is not something immortal, and time is > running away if we are not profit from it. People that you love may > get lost if you aren't show them how much you love and need them. > One day I faced a problem with someone who I considered as my brother > and I really love him, even until this moment. I made a mistake when I > delayed meeting him and discussing the problem, and saying I love you, > because destiny didn't save him for me. After 5 days he was with God. > He had an accident that took his life. I really miss him and his ,the > person was my uncle. So don't wait until you are standing at the foot > of their grave and crying. Pick up the phone today and call them, just > to say, "I love you" and solve the problem if there is one. > The second lesson that I have learned is that a troubled time create > a better relationship and rebuild that relationship to put it in a > righter place. One of the great things that my mother taught me was > honesty . She always requested me to be honest with everyone even in a > troubled situation. When I was 14 years old I didn't have a good > relationship with my mother ,always we are both clashed, she couldn't > understand me and I couldn't realize what she wanted. In that year I > got into deep troubled time that was a personal issue which I don't > want to write about . After a long time of thinking I decided to tell > my mother about it because I couldn't solve it due to my young age. At > the time when I told her , she got angry at the beginning, but after > that she discussed it with me and solved that problem, which I never > could solve it without my mother. Then the relationship between me and > my mother became better and now she is my best friend who I depend on > all the time. > The third lesson I have learned from life is to be thankful. Be > thankful for every thing that God give you . When I see TV and > newspaper, I watch people, for example in south of Lebanon and South > Africa , who couldn't speak, walk, breathe, eat, see, hear or move, > people who live with wars and starvation, people who live without > parents, without caring, without security of family and lack of > money. .I am thankful to God for the gifts that he give me, to live > with the lovely family , to live without deficiency , to create me in > good creating with the healthy body . We should try our best to save > these gifts and do our best to keep the blessings , we should realize > what invaluable things God give us. > In summary , each day of our lives we have opportunities to learn > lessons. Each moment , each good or bad experience that we have in our > life, we have to learn from it. Those lessons affect our life in a > positive way if we study that experience to avoid mistakes in the > future .In view of my experiences that I have had in my life I have > learned many things that are useful . Life is like a school every day > it teaches us something new like what I have learned from it. For > instance, in my relationship with my mother when I got into trouble, > she was my savior and that bad time reversed our relationship to > become stronger . Another example was my relationship with my uncle > when I missed a chance to solve my problem with him and delayed it > to another time which was not at my side and didn't save him for me to > say how much I loved him . In addition , I have learned to be thankful > for everything that God give me in a variety of ways . 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