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On 4/9/07, Anita <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:
>
>
> Hi,
> I don't know if there is any format that I can fit in, so I just wrote
> my suggestion with a beginning *** at the end of each paragraph.
>
> Best Regard
>
> Hou Pei
> The idea of having  single career is becoming old-fashioned one. The
> new fashion will be to have several careers or ways of earning money
> and further education will be something throughout the life.
> ***The idea of having a  single career is becoming old-fashioned
> ***further education will be needed throughout the whole life
>
> In today's world, technology has developed enormously. Perhaps, this
> is the main cause for people with single profession living their lives
> horribly. These days Multi National Companies, other small companies
> and even brides are demanding a multi-talented person. Certainly,
> people who are with multiple talents are ruling this world greatly.
> ***In today's world, technology has developed enormously. which
> perhaps accounts for the horrible livings of people with a single
> profession
> ***These days multi-national companies, small companies and even
> brides are demanding multi-talented job applicants
> *** Certainly multi-talented people are ruling  this world greatly.
>
>        In olden days, people were used to have merely single profession.
> It
> was not much tough to live their lives. Many people were used to do
> jobs under farmers' cultivated field or had there own business like
> making pots etc. Due to there hard work they got fame and their
> products were used to be sold in large proportion. Therefore, without
> technology people had came across many difficulties, but at least
> managed to earn bread and milk.
> *** In the past, people used to work in a single profession
> ***It was not so tough to support their lives
> ***in farmer's cultivated field
> ***their own business
> *** Because of their hard work, they got fame and their products were
> sold in large quantities.
> ***without technology people had come across many difficulties
>
>        Compared, with an enhancement in technology in modern days, many
> jobs
> are not in use and it is quite impossible to get a job without
> multiple skills. For instance, bank employees have been losing their
> jobs because many people now use ATM's for withdrawing money and even
> use home computer for local transactions. Similarly, travel agencies
> and retail stores are now trading on-line through computers. The
> people who were doing these jobs faced many problems and later
> realized to upgrade their skills. Competition has increased, small
> businesses are now no longer in existence because large corporations
> are paying more and getting more revenue. Therefore, the people who
> were in small businesses had great lose and had nothing to start it
> again. In addition, in this developing world labors are extreme cheap.
> So in industries like textile, cement etc, there is no place to find a
> job because almost work is being done by machines like loading and
> unloading of materials etc.
> ***In comparison, today technology is highly enhanced and takes over
> many jobs.It is quite impossible for people to get a job without
> multiple skills.
> ***trading on-line by computers.
> ***The people, who were doing these jobs before,are facing many
> problems and later realize to upgrade their skills.
> ***Competition is increasing, so small businesses are now no longer in
> existence because large corporations are  getting more revenue and
> paying more.
> ***the people who were in small businesses have great losses and have
> nothing to startup again.
>
>        Education plays a crucial role in human's life. Firstly, more
> preference ought to be given to studies rather than other activities
> like part time-jobs. Many technical institutes are being run by
> charitable trusts. It is an opportunity to learn computers at lowest
> fee. Therefore, along with education technical skills can be improved.
> Hence, the thing is one should be enthusiastic to attain his goals,
> some like holding higher qualification, to gain extensive technical
> knowledge and making good money would definitely lead to live a
> luxuries life.
> *** the lowest fee
> ***along with education, technical skills can be improved
> ***Hence, one should be enthusiastic to attain his goals, to hold
> higher qualification, to gain extensive technical knowledge. Making
> good money would definitely lead to live a luxury life.
>
> On Apr 9, 8:11 pm, lengendry king <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:
> > hello,
> >   good evening. I request your team to correct my script.
> >   thnx
> >   lucky
> >
> > ---------------------------------
> >  The all-new Yahoo! Mail goes wherever you go - free your email address
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> >
> >  The idea of having single career is becoming old.doc
> > 30KDownload
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