Hi! The following is my AD review of draft-ietf-cose-hash-sig-03:
** Section 3. Per "The signature value is a large byte string. The byte string is designed for easy parsing, and it includes a counter and type codes that indirectly provide all of the information that is needed to parse the byte string during signature validation." -- please propagate the clarifying edits of the form made on the related sentence of Section 3.0 in draft-ietf-lamps-cms-hash-sig (to clarify the exact parameters in the byte string and where this byte string is defined) -- the examples in Appendix A seem to imply a particular formatting (e.g., using the | to separate parameters), this should be clarified in this text ** This draft (COSE) and draft-ietf-lamps-cms-hash-sig (CMS) share common text. A number of changes were made to draft-lamps-cms-hash-sig in response to AD feedback and the IESG review (version -09 and -10). Please propagate these changes (where they are appropriate): -- Abstract and Section 1. Expand "HSS/LMS". -- from CMS Section 1.0 to COSE Section 1.0 -- from CMS Section 1.3 to COSE Section 1.1 -- from CMS Section 2.0 to COSE Section 2.0 -- from CMS Section 2.1 to COSE Section 2.1 -- from CMS Section 2.2 to COSE Section 2.2 -- from CMS Section 2.3 to COSE Section 2.3 -- from CMS Section 6.0 to COSE Section 6.0 Regards, Roman _______________________________________________ COSE mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/cose
