> On 2020-10-31, at 21:56, Martin Duke <[email protected]> wrote:
> 
> I would be happy if it the paragraph in question was rewritten to be clearer, 
> perhaps using the words in the exchange between me and Michael. Really, 
> simply replacing the passive voice in the sentence with active pretty much 
> forces you to be clear about who is doing what.

Like:

Certificates obtained from any of these methods MUST still be validated.
➔
Parties that intend to rely on the assertions made by a certificate
obtained from any of these methods still need to validate it.

?

(Note that I changed the RFC 2119 MUST into a statement of fact, which is 
orthogonal to the question of who the actor of the validation is.)

Grüße, Carsten

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