Paul:

> Thanks for a short and clear document. I didn't find anything wrong that 
> needs a revision before
> IETF LC, so I just issued that.
> 
> Perhaps the reason for adding "Recommended Deprecated" is not a clear as it 
> could be. I know it is used for firmware updates, and this is mentioned 
> somewhere in the document, but not prominently in the abstract or 
> introduction. I could see that the IESG might push back a little on that. So 
> feel free to make that more obvious.

The SUIT WG document in referenced the last sentence of the Introduction.  And, 
the Introduction is only one paragraph.  I could add a sentence about why these 
modes are more useful for firmware update if that is needed.

> NITS:
> 
>          The AES has a block size
> 
> I would remove "The"
> 
>         is not use more than
> 
> s/use/used
> 
>         the key key stream
> 
> s/key key/key
> 
>         to use this AES-CTR
> 
> s/this//
> 
>         implementations MUST use of AES-CBC
> 
> s/of//

All of these nits have been fixed in my edit buffer.

I will wat for IETF Last Call comments before posting the revision.

Russ

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