Lars:

Thanks for finding the typos.

Russ


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> COMMENT:
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> 
> # GEN AD review of draft-ietf-cose-aes-ctr-and-cbc-05
> 
> CC @larseggert
> 
> Thanks to Vijay Gurbani for the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) review
> (https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/QYDfbhRi0CKZyV4Wft6YqoOoAPg).
> 
> ## Nits
> 
> All comments below are about very minor potential issues that you may choose 
> to
> address in some way - or ignore - as you see fit. Some were flagged by
> automated tools (via https://github.com/larseggert/ietf-reviewtool), so there
> will likely be some false positives. There is no need to let me know what you
> did with these suggestions.
> 
> ### Grammar/style
> 
> #### Section 7, paragraph 2
> ```
> entations should change the key before before reaching this limit. To avoid c
>                                ^^^^^^^^^^^^^
> ```
> Possible typo: you repeated a word.

Fixed in my edit buffer.

> #### Section 8, paragraph 3
> ```
> block values are ever used for more that one plaintext with the same key, th
>                                    ^^^^
> ```
> Did you mean "than"?

Fixed in my edit buffer.

> #### Section 8, paragraph 19
> ```
> to prevent undetected stripping of the the authentication and integrity mecha
>                                   ^^^^^^^
> ```
> Possible typo: you repeated a word.

Fixed in my edit buffer.

> ## Notes
> 
> This review is in the ["IETF Comments" Markdown format][ICMF], You can use the
> [`ietf-comments` tool][ICT] to automatically convert this review into
> individual GitHub issues. Review generated by the [`ietf-reviewtool`][IRT].
> 
> [ICMF]: https://github.com/mnot/ietf-comments/blob/main/format.md
> [ICT]: https://github.com/mnot/ietf-comments
> [IRT]: https://github.com/larseggert/ietf-reviewtool
> 

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