On Wed, Oct 26, 2022 at 5:21 AM John Cowan <[email protected]> wrote: > I prefer it as written, which is a full grammatical sentence. Dropping the > "an" makes it a mild form of headlinese, which is fine since this is in > fact a headline, but certainly not necessary. (Extreme headlinese can lead > to ambiguity, sometimes with grotesque results, as in the WWII-era headline > "British Push Bottles Up German Rear", where by intention "push" = "sudden > attack" and "bottles up" = "prevents movement of") >
I find that example conclusive. I'm not going to recommend that Marc change the title.
