Oh, from looking at your website I don't see that you are more commercial than say, I am, which is after all the measure we all use, is it not? :-P
On a technical point, in neither Chrome nor Firefox can I find your pricing when I was looking for it. I found a button which says pricing, but there isn't any pricing there. It says to enter my email above, but there is no box for that, on that page. I then have to be clever enough to figure out that you mean earler in the series (as you have set it up in a linear fashion) but in fact the contact box is one page below, not above. I am your potential buyer and I am not that clever. 1) Never promise anything you will not deliver, it makes you look untrustworthy. If the button says pricing I do not expect to have to give you my email address. I expect a price. If you haven't got one (and I am about to take my own prices down as they confuse people it turns out) then don't call that button "pricing". 2) The "above" thingie is confusing -- most people think you mean "at the top of this page, above this text block" and most will not go hunting for it. 3) You need pictures. Lotsa pictures. I don't want to hear about the relaxing atmosphere and the stunning view, I want to see them. Otherwise it sounds like a come on. 4) I like the way you have live chat set up to respond when you are not there with a "leave a message". This seems to be what all the cool kids are doing now, the live chat, but it's very annoying when it responds "Hi, how can I help you? " and I answer and it turns out there is nobody there. 5) If you are live and not yet open, which appears to be the case, I would come out and say so somewhere before the very last page. At this moment your website promises an existing community, a place full of people right up until the last bit. If it is not at this very moment an existing community, don't say it is, it makes you look untrustworthy. Just say "we are creating a community, come be a part of it" or "We are a group of blah blah and we are looking for baldibla". Or something like that. Just some thoughts, they are no doubt worth what you paid for them. :- P And welcome to the group. Jeannine On Feb 12, 4:44 pm, SN <[email protected]> wrote: > Hi All, > > We've been diligently working on DigiCafe for over a year now, and I > think it's now time to reveal it to the group for critique and advice. > > DigiCafe is a bit different..and I suspect might draw some criticism > for it's more commercial approach to Coworking, but be assured - deep > down, our commercial drive of this is intended to make sure it's last > longing. We could never do this without groups like CS (good luck to > SF on replacing such a resource) > > Anyhow, back to the point: DigiCafe, it's a coworking cafe. An 8000 > square foot building with a cafe on the first floor, leading to the > dedicated coworking space no the second floor - the unique downtown > Houston building also features a rooftop patio. > > The team behind DigiCafe is built of both members with restaurant/cafe > experience, as well as a a few who have telecommuted extensively for > the past 12+ years, and coworked over the last couple.. > > We're slated to open this summer. Would love to hear some feedback on > the new site -www.digicafe.com > > SN > DigiCafe Team > @digiCafeHOU > 713.234.0787 -- You received this message because you are subscribed to the Google Groups "Coworking" group. To post to this group, send email to [email protected]. To unsubscribe from this group, send email to [email protected]. For more options, visit this group at http://groups.google.com/group/coworking?hl=en.
