Alex - Thanks for your feedback. I appreciate it. I like the idea of changing it to be more collaborative and community based. Maybe I should have two versions as this one is to target investments and money and you know how those traditional bankers understand new ideas :)
Thanks again, Tyler On Mar 28, 3:04 pm, Alex Hillman <dangerouslyawes...@gmail.com> wrote: > Tyler, > > Sounds like it has a ton of emphasis on the space, very little on the > community. Try tuning it to focus on the people instead of the place and > see what you come up with! > > -Alex > > /ah > indyhall.org > coworking in philadelphia > > > > > > > > On Wed, Mar 28, 2012 at 4:53 PM, hssmedia <ty...@hssmedia.com> wrote: > > Hello, > > > I wanted to know your opinion on the value proposition and > > differentiation statements that I have prepared to use for future > > marketing, funding, explanation, etc. Is there anything important that > > you think needs to be refined or changed to match the culture of > > coworking? Thanks in advance! > > > Congruent is for business owners, freelancers, entrepreneurs, and > > remote workers who need a reliable, quiet, and affordable place to > > work. The Congruent Coworking Space is a non-traditional commercial > > property that works on a gym membership, come and go, model. Unlike > > expensive executive suites or long term lease agreements, our office > > and community is the only low cost, no commitment open office space > > for freelancers, business owners, remote workers, and entrepreneurs. > > > -- > > You received this message because you are subscribed to the Google Groups > > "Coworking" group. > > To post to this group, send email to coworking@googlegroups.com. > > To unsubscribe from this group, send email to > > coworking+unsubscr...@googlegroups.com. > > For more options, visit this group at > >http://groups.google.com/group/coworking?hl=en. -- You received this message because you are subscribed to the Google Groups "Coworking" group. To post to this group, send email to coworking@googlegroups.com. To unsubscribe from this group, send email to coworking+unsubscr...@googlegroups.com. For more options, visit this group at http://groups.google.com/group/coworking?hl=en.
