The links in the PDF version of the May 2013 draft do not seem to work. 

And some more small & very small things: 

Link issues that I assume are still there in the May 2013 version:
* Shouldn't an internal link to an entity or a property point to the entry 
itself rather than the page on which the entry begins? For example in the entry 
for E2, clicking on the link to E2 (i.e. the ranges of P114 to P120) brings you 
actually further away from the entry.
* in the table of contents, section "CIDOC CRM Property Declarations", P142 is 
missing (of course, in the main text it is there)
* P152: domain/range: no links to E21 

The Roman page numbering starts two times, first with the title page (page 1 of 
179), and again with the Introduction (page 9 of 179).

E3, E4: "Properties" in bold font
E36, P62: E1CRM (missing space)
P41: in the Scope note: P41 classified (was classified) ["by" missing]
E8, E11, P129, P139: inconsistent indentations in the examples
E74 scope note: indentation
E46: gap in "Data & Knowledge Engineering"

P106: in the examples:
"P106 (E33)" should be "(E33)" (I think; or "The Scope note of P106 (E33)" or 
so?)
"P106 (E90)" should be "(E90)"

P150: I think the green text should be “defines typical parts of", or the Scope 
note should start with "This property associates", and the example should be 
"Car motors (E55) defines typical parts of cars (E55)"

P152: empty subproperty field
E73: empty Properties field
P130: missing space after . in second superproperty 
P137: missing spaces in subproperty

E16: the range change of P39 from E70 to E1 isn't reflected here (the range may 
or may not change again, but right now the descriptions in P39 and E16 are 
inconsistent)

Wolfgang


Am 14.11.2012 um 10:24 schrieb Wolfgang Schmidle 
<[email protected]>:

> Where should I report minor issues? Things like
> 
> P106 empty sub/superproperty fields; wrong spacing between examples
> P125 empty subproperty field
> P130 misplaced . in second superproperty, second . should be :
> P137 () in title with superfluous spaces; missing spaces in subproperty
> P148 empty sub/superproperty fields
> 
> Wolfgang
> 
> 
> Am 14.11.12 09:23, schrieb Chryssoula Bekiari:
> 
>> Dear all
>> 
>> You may find the new draft version 5.1 of the CIDOC CRM in
>> http://www.cidoc-crm.org/docs/cidoc_crm_version_5.1.pdf
>> 
>> best
>> 
>> Chryssoula
>> 
> 
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