Author: ken
Date: 2006-04-29 11:42:48 -0600 (Sat, 29 Apr 2006)
New Revision: 1487

Modified:
   trunk/BOOK/temp-system/common/choose.xml
   trunk/BOOK/temp-system/mips64/choose.xml
   trunk/BOOK/temp-system/multilib/choose.xml
Log:
grammar fix for non-multilib.

Modified: trunk/BOOK/temp-system/common/choose.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/temp-system/common/choose.xml    2006-04-29 15:47:17 UTC (rev 
1486)
+++ trunk/BOOK/temp-system/common/choose.xml    2006-04-29 17:42:48 UTC (rev 
1487)
@@ -30,7 +30,7 @@
 <screen ><userinput>/tools/lib/libc.so.6
 /tools/bin/gcc -v</userinput></screen>
 
-  <para os="d">If any of these commands fail, you will have to follow the boot
+  <para>If either of these commands fail, you will have to follow the boot
   method.</para>
 
   <para os="e">For the boot method, follow <xref 
linkend="chapter-boot"/>.</para>

Modified: trunk/BOOK/temp-system/mips64/choose.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/temp-system/mips64/choose.xml    2006-04-29 15:47:17 UTC (rev 
1486)
+++ trunk/BOOK/temp-system/mips64/choose.xml    2006-04-29 17:42:48 UTC (rev 
1487)
@@ -28,7 +28,7 @@
 /tools/bin/gcc -v</userinput></screen>
 
     <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude";
-    href="../common/choose.xml"
+    href="../multilib/choose.xml"
     xpointer="xpointer(//[EMAIL PROTECTED]'d'])"/>
 
     <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude";

Modified: trunk/BOOK/temp-system/multilib/choose.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/temp-system/multilib/choose.xml  2006-04-29 15:47:17 UTC (rev 
1486)
+++ trunk/BOOK/temp-system/multilib/choose.xml  2006-04-29 17:42:48 UTC (rev 
1487)
@@ -26,10 +26,10 @@
 /tools/lib64/libc.so.6
 /tools/bin/gcc -v</userinput></screen>
 
-    <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude";
-    href="../common/choose.xml"
-    xpointer="xpointer(//[EMAIL PROTECTED]'d'])"/>
+  <para os="d">If any of these commands fail, you will have to follow the boot
+  method.</para>
 
+
     <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude";
     href="../common/choose.xml"
     xpointer="xpointer(//[EMAIL PROTECTED]'e'])"/>

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