Author: chris
Date: 2006-05-30 16:29:30 -0600 (Tue, 30 May 2006)
New Revision: 1702
Modified:
trunk/BOOK/chroot/common/introduction.xml
trunk/BOOK/final-system/x86/grub.xml
trunk/BOOK/introduction/common/changelog.xml
Log:
Text updates
Modified: trunk/BOOK/chroot/common/introduction.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/chroot/common/introduction.xml 2006-05-30 21:38:46 UTC (rev
1701)
+++ trunk/BOOK/chroot/common/introduction.xml 2006-05-30 22:29:30 UTC (rev
1702)
@@ -11,6 +11,6 @@
<title>Introduction</title>
<para>This chapter shows how to prepare a <command>chroot</command>
- jail to build the final system packages into it.</para>
+ jail to build the final system packages into.</para>
</sect1>
Modified: trunk/BOOK/final-system/x86/grub.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/final-system/x86/grub.xml 2006-05-30 21:38:46 UTC (rev
1701)
+++ trunk/BOOK/final-system/x86/grub.xml 2006-05-30 22:29:30 UTC (rev
1702)
@@ -23,9 +23,10 @@
<sect2 role="installation">
<title>Installation of GRUB</title>
- <para os="p1">Sometimes grub under Linux 2.6 doesn't detect the disk
geometry correctly,
- which will result in an error message. The error message is
- Error 24: Attempt to access block outside partition. The following patch
fixes this issue:</para>
+ <para os="p1">GRUB has an issue where it sometimes doesn't detect
+ the disk geometry correctly when used with Linux 2.6. This results
+ in the error message <literal>Error 24: Attempt to access block outside
+ partition<literal>. The following patch fixes this issue:</para>
<screen os="p2"><userinput>patch -Np1 -i
../&grub-disk-patch;</userinput></screen>
Modified: trunk/BOOK/introduction/common/changelog.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/introduction/common/changelog.xml 2006-05-30 21:38:46 UTC
(rev 1701)
+++ trunk/BOOK/introduction/common/changelog.xml 2006-05-30 22:29:30 UTC
(rev 1702)
@@ -43,6 +43,11 @@
<para>[jim] - Added a patch to fix a missing declaration of R_OK
in util-linux.</para>
</listitem>
+ <listitem>
+ <para>[Chris] - Removed the long-gone swapdev program from
+ the list of programs installed by util-linux, and several
+ programs not installed by default from the kbd program list.</para>
+ </listitem>
</itemizedlist>
</listitem>
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