Author: chris
Date: 2006-06-20 16:33:58 -0600 (Tue, 20 Jun 2006)
New Revision: 1805
Modified:
trunk/BOOK/boot/ppc64/yaboot.xml
trunk/BOOK/final-system/common/glibc.xml
trunk/BOOK/final-system/common/shadow.xml
trunk/BOOK/final-system/common/vim.xml
trunk/BOOK/final-system/multilib/shadow-64bit.xml
Log:
Text/grammar fixes
Modified: trunk/BOOK/boot/ppc64/yaboot.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/boot/ppc64/yaboot.xml 2006-06-20 21:16:24 UTC (rev 1804)
+++ trunk/BOOK/boot/ppc64/yaboot.xml 2006-06-20 22:33:58 UTC (rev 1805)
@@ -47,7 +47,7 @@
href="../ppc/yaboot.xml"
xpointer="xpointer(//[EMAIL PROTECTED]'f'])"/>
- <para os="f2">It is also apprpriate if you are running an old 32-bit Linux
+ <para os="f2">It is also appropriate if you are running an old 32-bit Linux
kernel on a 64-bit machine, or if the kernel personality has been forced to
32-bit.</para>
Modified: trunk/BOOK/final-system/common/glibc.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/final-system/common/glibc.xml 2006-06-20 21:16:24 UTC (rev
1804)
+++ trunk/BOOK/final-system/common/glibc.xml 2006-06-20 22:33:58 UTC (rev
1805)
@@ -28,14 +28,14 @@
<title>Installation of Glibc</title>
<note os="z">
- <para>Some packages outside of LFS suggest installing GNU libiconv in
+ <para>Some packages outside of CLFS suggest installing GNU libiconv in
order to translate data from one encoding to another. The project's
home page (<ulink url="http://www.gnu.org/software/libiconv/"/>) says
<quote>This library provides an <function>iconv()</function>
implementation, for use on systems which don't have one, or whose
implementation cannot convert from/to Unicode.</quote> Glibc provides
an <function>iconv()</function> implementation and can convert from/to
- Unicode, therefore libiconv is not required on an LFS system.</para>
+ Unicode, therefore libiconv is not required on a CLFS system.</para>
</note>
<para os="b">The Glibc build system is self-contained and will install
Modified: trunk/BOOK/final-system/common/shadow.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/final-system/common/shadow.xml 2006-06-20 21:16:24 UTC (rev
1804)
+++ trunk/BOOK/final-system/common/shadow.xml 2006-06-20 22:33:58 UTC (rev
1805)
@@ -44,7 +44,7 @@
<varlistentry>
<term><parameter>--without-libpam</parameter></term>
<listitem><para>Support for Linux-PAM is enabled by default in Shadow,
- however PAM is not installed on a base LFS system, so this switch
+ however PAM is not installed on a base CLFS system, so this switch
disables PAM support in Shadow. For instructions to install PAM and
link Shadow to it, you can look at
<ulink url="&blfs-root;view/svn/postlfs/shadow.html"/>.</para></listitem>
@@ -52,13 +52,13 @@
<varlistentry>
<term><parameter>--without-audit</parameter></term>
<listitem><para>Support for auditing is enabled by default, but a
- library that it needs is not installed in a base LFS system. This
+ library that it needs is not installed in a base CLFS system. This
switch disables auditing support.</para></listitem>
</varlistentry>
<varlistentry>
<term><parameter>--without-selinux</parameter></term>
<listitem><para>Support for selinux is enabled by default, but selinux
- is not built in a base LFS system and configure will fail without this
+ is not built in a base CLFS system and configure will fail without this
switch.</para></listitem>
</varlistentry>
</variablelist>
@@ -85,9 +85,9 @@
passwords longer than 8 characters. It is also necessary to change the
obsolete <filename class="directory">/var/spool/mail</filename> location
for user mailboxes that Shadow uses by default to the <filename
- class="directory">/var/mail</filename> location used currently. Both of
- these can be accomplished by changing the relevant configuration file
- while copying it to its destination:</para>
+ class="directory">/var/mail</filename> location used currently. Use the
+ following sed command to make these changes to the appropriate
+ configuration file:</para>
<indexterm zone="shadow-login_defs">
<primary sortas="e-/etc/login.defs">/etc/login.defs</primary>
@@ -116,12 +116,6 @@
rm -v /lib/libshadow.so
ln -svf ../../lib/libshadow.so.0 /usr/lib/libshadow.so</userinput></screen>
- <para os="y">The <option>-D</option> option of the
<command>useradd</command>
- program requires the <filename class="directory">/etc/default</filename>
- directory for it to work properly:</para>
-
-<screen os="z"><userinput>install -dv /etc/default</userinput></screen>
-
</sect2>
<sect2 id="conf-shadow" role="configuration">
@@ -149,6 +143,12 @@
<screen role="nodump"><userinput>grpconv</userinput></screen>
+ <para>To view or change the default settings for new user accounts that
+ you create, you can edit <filename>/etc/default/useradd</filename>. See
+ <command>man useradd</command> or
+ <ulink url="&blfs-root;view/svn/postlfs/skel.html"/> for more
+ information.</para>
+
</sect2>
<sect2 id="root-password" role="configuration">
Modified: trunk/BOOK/final-system/common/vim.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/final-system/common/vim.xml 2006-06-20 21:16:24 UTC (rev
1804)
+++ trunk/BOOK/final-system/common/vim.xml 2006-06-20 22:33:58 UTC (rev
1805)
@@ -98,10 +98,10 @@
<screen os="o"><userinput>ln -sv ../vim/vim&vim-version2;/doc
/usr/share/doc/vim-&vim-version;</userinput></screen>
<para os="p">If an X Window System is going to be installed on the LFS
- system, it may be necessary to recompile Vim after installing X. Vim
+ system, you may want to recompile Vim after installing X. Vim
comes with a GUI version of the editor that requires X and some
- additional libraries to be installed. For more information on this
- process, refer to the Vim documentation and the Vim installation page
+ additional libraries to be installed. For more information, refer to the
+ Vim documentation and the Vim installation page
in the BLFS book at <ulink
url="&blfs-root;view/svn/postlfs/editors.html#postlfs-editors-vim"/>.</para>
Modified: trunk/BOOK/final-system/multilib/shadow-64bit.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/final-system/multilib/shadow-64bit.xml 2006-06-20 21:16:24 UTC
(rev 1804)
+++ trunk/BOOK/final-system/multilib/shadow-64bit.xml 2006-06-20 22:33:58 UTC
(rev 1805)
@@ -104,14 +104,6 @@
rm -v /lib64/libshadow.so
ln -svf ../../lib64/libshadow.so.0 /usr/lib64/libshadow.so</userinput></screen>
- <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude";
- href="../common/shadow.xml"
- xpointer="xpointer(//[EMAIL PROTECTED]'y'])"/>
-
- <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude";
- href="../common/shadow.xml"
- xpointer="xpointer(//[EMAIL PROTECTED]'z'])"/>
-
</sect2>
<xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude";
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