Author: jim
Date: 2006-07-13 13:47:38 -0600 (Thu, 13 Jul 2006)
New Revision: 1998

Modified:
   /
   branches/clfs-2.0/BOOK/final-preps/creatingfiles.xml
Log:
 [EMAIL PROTECTED] (orig r2109):  jciccone | 2006-07-13 11:37:06 -0700
 Some text cleanups to the user/group descriptions.



Property changes on: 
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Name: svk:merge
   - b6734a72-470d-0410-b049-f317dca95413:/:2108
   + b6734a72-470d-0410-b049-f317dca95413:/:2109

Modified: branches/clfs-2.0/BOOK/final-preps/creatingfiles.xml
===================================================================
--- branches/clfs-2.0/BOOK/final-preps/creatingfiles.xml        2006-07-13 
19:47:21 UTC (rev 1997)
+++ branches/clfs-2.0/BOOK/final-preps/creatingfiles.xml        2006-07-13 
19:47:38 UTC (rev 1998)
@@ -65,14 +65,14 @@
     <varlistentry>
       <term><literal>bin:x:1:1:bin:/bin:/bin/false</literal></term>
       <listitem>
-        <para>Was recommended for compatibility with legacy 
applications.</para>
+        <para>Can be useful for compatibility with legacy applications.</para>
       </listitem>
     </varlistentry>
     <varlistentry>
       <term><literal>daemon:x:2:6:daemon:/sbin:/bin/false</literal></term>
       <listitem>
-        <para>Was recommended as an unprivileged User ID/Group ID for daemons
-        to execute under in order to limit their access to the system.</para>
+        <para>It is often recommended to use an unprivileged User ID/Group ID
+        for daemons in order to limit their access to the system.</para>
       </listitem>
     </varlistentry>
     <varlistentry>
@@ -102,7 +102,7 @@
     <varlistentry>
       
<term><literal>uucp:x:32:32:uucp:/var/spool/uucp:/bin/false</literal></term>
       <listitem>
-        <para>Often used for Unix-to-Unix Copy of files from one server to the 
next.</para>
+        <para>Often used for Unix-to-Unix Copy of files from one server to the 
next</para>
       </listitem>
     </varlistentry>
     <varlistentry>
@@ -114,13 +114,13 @@
     <varlistentry>
       
<term><literal>postmaster:x:51:30:postmaster:/var/spool/mail:/bin/false</literal></term>
       <listitem>
-        <para>Is the account that receives all the information of troubles 
with the mail server.</para>
+        <para>Generally used as an account that receives all the information 
of troubles with the mail server.</para>
       </listitem>
     </varlistentry>
     <varlistentry>
       <term><literal>nobody:x:65534:65534:nobody:/:/bin/false</literal></term>
       <listitem>
-        <para>This account is used by NFS.</para>
+        <para>Used by NFS.</para>
       </listitem>
     </varlistentry>
   </variablelist>
@@ -184,7 +184,7 @@
     <varlistentry>
       <term><literal>uucp:x:32:uucp</literal></term>
       <listitem>
-        <para>Used by the Unix-to-Unix copy users.</para>
+        <para>Used by the Unix-to-Unix copy users</para>
       </listitem>
     </varlistentry>
     <varlistentry>
@@ -203,7 +203,7 @@
     <varlistentry>
       <term><literal>nobody:x:65534:</literal></term>
       <listitem>
-        <para>This is used by NFS.</para>
+        <para>This is used by NFS</para>
       </listitem>
     </varlistentry>
   </variablelist>

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