Author: jim
Date: 2006-07-18 01:45:42 -0600 (Tue, 18 Jul 2006)
New Revision: 2031
Modified:
/
trunk/BOOK/general.ent
trunk/BOOK/introduction/common/changelog.xml
trunk/BOOK/prologue/common/foreword.xml
Log:
[EMAIL PROTECTED] (orig r2152): jeremy | 2006-07-17 23:30:15 -0700
Minor foreword fixes thanks to Karen
Property changes on:
___________________________________________________________________
Name: svk:merge
- b6734a72-470d-0410-b049-f317dca95413:/:2151
+ b6734a72-470d-0410-b049-f317dca95413:/:2152
Modified: trunk/BOOK/general.ent
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/general.ent 2006-07-18 07:45:30 UTC (rev 2030)
+++ trunk/BOOK/general.ent 2006-07-18 07:45:42 UTC (rev 2031)
@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
<!ENTITY month "07"> <!-- Use two digits -->
<!ENTITY month_name "July">
-<!ENTITY day "16"> <!-- Use two digits -->
+<!ENTITY day "17"> <!-- Use two digits -->
<!ENTITY year "2006"> <!-- Use four digits -->
<!ENTITY releasedate "&month_name; &day;, &year;">
Modified: trunk/BOOK/introduction/common/changelog.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/introduction/common/changelog.xml 2006-07-18 07:45:30 UTC
(rev 2030)
+++ trunk/BOOK/introduction/common/changelog.xml 2006-07-18 07:45:42 UTC
(rev 2031)
@@ -37,6 +37,15 @@
-->
<listitem>
+ <para>July 17, 2006</para>
+ <itemizedlist>
+ <listitem>
+ <para>[jeremy] - Minor foreword fixups courtesy of Karen`.</para>
+ </listitem>
+ </itemizedlist>
+ </listitem>
+
+ <listitem>
<para>July 16, 2006</para>
<itemizedlist>
<listitem>
Modified: trunk/BOOK/prologue/common/foreword.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/prologue/common/foreword.xml 2006-07-18 07:45:30 UTC (rev
2030)
+++ trunk/BOOK/prologue/common/foreword.xml 2006-07-18 07:45:42 UTC (rev
2031)
@@ -24,7 +24,7 @@
udev dynamic device structure, sanitized kernel headers, and other
improvements to the Linux From Scratch system.</para>
- <para>The one "flaw" in LFS is that it has always been based on a x86
+ <para>The one "flaw" in LFS is that it has always been based on an x86
class processor. With the advent of the Athlon 64 and Intel EM64T
processors, the x86-only LFS is no longer ideal. Throughout this time,
Ryan Oliver developed and documented a process by which you could
@@ -39,13 +39,13 @@
architectures such as Sparc, MIPS, and Alpha, and much more.</para>
<para>We hope you enjoy building your own CLFS system, and the benefits
- that come from a system tailored to your needs!</para>
+ that come from a system tailored to your needs.</para>
<literallayout>--
Jeremy Utley, CLFS 1.x Release Manager (Page Author)
Jim Gifford, CLFS Project Co-leader
Ryan Oliver, CLFS Project Co-leader
-Joe Ciccone, Justin Knierin, Chris Staub, Matt Darcy, Ken Moffat,
+Joe Ciccone, Justin Knierim, Chris Staub, Matt Darcy, Ken Moffat,
Manuel Canales Esparcia, and Nathan Coulson - CLFS Developers</literallayout>
</sect1>
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