Author: jim
Date: 2006-09-02 13:50:02 -0600 (Sat, 02 Sep 2006)
New Revision: 2390
Modified:
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trunk/BOOK/introduction/common/acknowledgements.xml
trunk/BOOK/prologue/common/organization.xml
Log:
[EMAIL PROTECTED] (orig r2528): jciccone | 2006-09-02 10:51:06 -0700
Text updates.
Property changes on:
___________________________________________________________________
Name: svk:merge
- b6734a72-470d-0410-b049-f317dca95413:/:2526
+ b6734a72-470d-0410-b049-f317dca95413:/:2528
Modified: trunk/BOOK/introduction/common/acknowledgements.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/introduction/common/acknowledgements.xml 2006-09-02 03:55:15 UTC
(rev 2389)
+++ trunk/BOOK/introduction/common/acknowledgements.xml 2006-09-02 19:50:02 UTC
(rev 2390)
@@ -64,7 +64,7 @@
<para>Outside the Development Team</para>
<itemizedlist>
<listitem>
- <para>J�rg Billeter - Testing and assisted in the development of the
Linux Headers Package</para>
+ <para>J�rg Billeter - Testing and assisting in the development of the
Linux Headers Package</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
<para>Richard Downing - Testing, typo, and content fixes.</para>
@@ -77,9 +77,10 @@
</listitem>
</itemizedlist>
-<para>The CLFS team would also like to acknowledge people who
-have supported, spotted needed corrections, and testing of the cross-lfs book
-via the CLFS-DEV Mailing lists.</para>
+ <para>The CLFS team would also like to acknowledge contributions of people
+ from <ulink url="[email protected]"/> and associated mailing lists
+ who have provided valuable technical and editorial corrections while testing
+ the Cross-LFS book.</para>
<itemizedlist>
<listitem>
Modified: trunk/BOOK/prologue/common/organization.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/prologue/common/organization.xml 2006-09-02 03:55:15 UTC (rev
2389)
+++ trunk/BOOK/prologue/common/organization.xml 2006-09-02 19:50:02 UTC (rev
2390)
@@ -63,12 +63,12 @@
<sect2>
<title>Appendices</title>
- <para>The Appendices contain various information that doesn't really fit
- anywhere else in the book. Appendix A contains definitions of acronyms and
- terms used in the book, Appendix B has Acknowledgments of people who
- have helped work on the CLFS project and website, and Appendices C
- and D have information about package dependencies and the the
- build order. Some architectures may have additional appendices for
+ <para>The appendices contain information that doesn't really fit anywhere
+ else in the book. Appendix A contains definitions of acronyms and
+ terms used in the book; Appendix B gives acknowledgments to people
+ who have helped work on the CLFS project and website; Appendix C and
+ D have information about package dependencies and the the build
+ order. Some architectures may have additional appendices for
arch-specific issues.</para>
</sect2>
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