Tell them not to quit their day job?? But aside from that, there's a ton of problems.
The first is there's too much dead space. When one talks of branding, they don't mean a hot metal branding iron with the top image being the result of it scorching flesh. I immediately get the feeling that the madhouse logo should be deeply tatooed to my scalp. The bright red line through almost the center of the page instinctively tells me to click the back button...now. I have to assume this page is for a cover band and that the band is in Norway? Historien Musikken Gutta Kontakt Pretty much gives that away. So as an American, I'm already heead for the door because I don't understand a word on that page. I'm immediately introduced to a foreign world. And that just doesn't work from me. Some helpful suggestions: What's your purpose? Hopefully, get the the band some gigs. With that in mind. The logo needs to be in the upper left hand corner leaving plenty of space for polaroid like images of each band member. Ogranized in such a way that they look like they have been dropped on a table. That would help give the site that up close and personal look and feel. Gigs! Past, present and future should be the Speisekarte of the page. And, if you're wanting to appeal to both English and German potential clients, you might want to have a button for both. NAVIGATION Really sucks. You click on a like and everything jumps around. You got a lot of work to do here. With the most important focus: Selling the band. On Thu, Apr 15, 2010 at 3:23 AM, Bajazz <[email protected]> wrote: > Any input > > Thanks!! > > -- > -- > You received this because you are subscribed to the "Design the Web with CSS" > at Google groups. > To post: [email protected] > To unsubscribe: [email protected] > > To unsubscribe, reply using "remove me" as the subject. > -- -- You received this because you are subscribed to the "Design the Web with CSS" at Google groups. To post: [email protected] To unsubscribe: [email protected]
