On Wed, 28 Jul 2010, Matthias Andree wrote:

mandree     2010-07-28 22:52:28 UTC

 FreeBSD ports repository

 Modified files:
   .                    UPDATING
 Log:
 Minor speling and Capitalization and a few legibility changes.

 Revision  Changes    Path
 1.952     +9 -9      ports/UPDATING

http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/cvsweb.cgi/ports/UPDATING.diff?&r1=1.951&r2=1.952&f=h

The extra comma you added in the libassuan entry makes it worse, not better. Generally less commas is a better editorial choice, written English is not supposed to emulate the same cadences as spoken English.

Also, as much as I am supportive of the idea of improving our documentation, I'm not sure that the value of constantly revising old UPDATING entries exceeds the cost of the churn in the repo.


Doug

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