On 10/8/11 9:21 PM, Warren Block wrote: > wblock 2011-10-09 01:21:53 UTC > > FreeBSD doc repository > > Modified files: > en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall chapter.sgml > Log: > Various fixes: > "effective at improving performance" is correct in English. > "issues with the installation" is vague, reworded. > Expand/clarify BIOS boot menu information. > Spelling/grammar. > Simplify Introducing bsdinstall. > Expand/clarify mirror site description choice. > Attempt to remove unnecessary instances of "the" and "you". > "Booting" is used in this doc more than "restarting". > Add link to network information. >
And it was approved by gjb :) -- Glen Barber | [email protected] FreeBSD Documentation Project
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